Reviews for After the Rain - Drafts |
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![]() ![]() ![]() sabes si Minato hubiera escuchado a Anko hablando sobre lo que Naruto y Shisui hicieron, es capas que iría a matar a Shisui por eso |
![]() ![]() ![]() poor naruto.. I wonder what happen if minato find out.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() busted again.. really! this is hilarious. |
![]() ![]() OMG u updated! Yay! I love the original story sooooo much! Hope u continue it tho no pressure... Really love it... And this drafts are amazing too... This new one very funny... Shi chan in neon orange bathrobe ha ha ha |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh no. I didn’t realize you weren’t sure about continuing the main story.I advise that you should put “Hiatus” in the summary for the main story, since I assumed updates would just be really slow, but this is different. I hope you do continue it, since I really love it! If you do decide not to continue, since you mentioned you had more material, I hope you can create a separate ‘story’ that just has those drafts? (You don’t have to if you don’t want to, but) I really love this universe and I want to see more of how things could have gone, even if they’re unfinished or would have been changed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is one of my fave tropes, that Obito’s excuses are all real but they just seem fake. And aw, Shi-chan. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, Naru was worried too. And Itachi, lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, poor Rin. I think a big part is what Shisui brought up, about him not being able to bring himself to it because Obito liked her. I hope Rin can figure that out too, that it’s not a thing against her. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was so sweet of them. I know how hard Anko was to them before as well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw. One, I always love a Naruto (canon or fanon) who’s good with kids. But also two, Sasuke especially was so sweet before the massacre. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lmao. What luck in the beginning when Naru said she wasn’t there last night, but then the unluckiness of her saying that she’s been in his bed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw. I actually really love Shisui’s speech on this. And wow, lol having Itachi be the one who showed the series to Kakashi. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Por favor continue a história original. Por favor |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thisnis utterly hilarious. Such a short entertainment in this gloomy life let’s hope this doesn’t get to the hokage is all |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love how Rin went from dont pressurise her to having sex to discussion of the sex itself xD it’s a cute one shot |