Reviews for After the Rain - Drafts
Titania1796 chapter 8 . 7/11/2021
sabes si Minato hubiera escuchado a Anko hablando sobre lo que Naruto y Shisui hicieron, es capas que iría a matar a Shisui por eso
ryafayra chapter 8 . 3/26/2021
poor naruto.. I wonder what happen if minato find out..
ryafayra chapter 2 . 3/26/2021
busted again.. really! this is hilarious.
Esmeralda Riddle chapter 8 . 2/11/2021
OMG u updated! Yay! I love the original story sooooo much! Hope u continue it tho no pressure... Really love it... And this drafts are amazing too... This new one very funny... Shi chan in neon orange bathrobe ha ha ha
starlighttauriel chapter 8 . 1/10/2021
Oh no. I didn’t realize you weren’t sure about continuing the main story.I advise that you should put “Hiatus” in the summary for the main story, since I assumed updates would just be really slow, but this is different. I hope you do continue it, since I really love it!

If you do decide not to continue, since you mentioned you had more material, I hope you can create a separate ‘story’ that just has those drafts? (You don’t have to if you don’t want to, but) I really love this universe and I want to see more of how things could have gone, even if they’re unfinished or would have been changed.
starlighttauriel chapter 7 . 1/10/2021
This is one of my fave tropes, that Obito’s excuses are all real but they just seem fake. And aw, Shi-chan.
starlighttauriel chapter 6 . 1/10/2021
Aw, Naru was worried too. And Itachi, lol.
starlighttauriel chapter 5 . 1/10/2021
Aw, poor Rin. I think a big part is what Shisui brought up, about him not being able to bring himself to it because Obito liked her. I hope Rin can figure that out too, that it’s not a thing against her.
starlighttauriel chapter 4 . 1/10/2021
This was so sweet of them. I know how hard Anko was to them before as well.
starlighttauriel chapter 3 . 1/10/2021
Aw. One, I always love a Naruto (canon or fanon) who’s good with kids. But also two, Sasuke especially was so sweet before the massacre.
starlighttauriel chapter 2 . 1/10/2021
Lmao. What luck in the beginning when Naru said she wasn’t there last night, but then the unluckiness of her saying that she’s been in his bed.
starlighttauriel chapter 1 . 1/10/2021
Aw. I actually really love Shisui’s speech on this. And wow, lol having Itachi be the one who showed the series to Kakashi.
Rukia Barbosa chapter 8 . 12/30/2020
Por favor continue a história original. Por favor
messyroo chapter 8 . 12/29/2020
Thisnis utterly hilarious. Such a short entertainment in this gloomy life let’s hope this doesn’t get to the hokage is all
nocloudypooh chapter 8 . 12/29/2020
I love how Rin went from dont pressurise her to having sex to discussion of the sex itself xD it’s a cute one shot
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