Reviews for After the Rain - Drafts
Shion Lee chapter 1 . 12/13/2017
ITACHI IS JUST SO CUTE
Elisabeth Liselotte chapter 1 . 12/11/2017
Haha
TheBeauty chapter 7 . 12/8/2017
It's a shame Naruto wasn't around too :P
Guest chapter 7 . 12/8/2017
Argh, my maternal instincts are kicking in, i think i would have acted like the grandma:-D
Those two are such cinnamon rolls
Yeah the funny thing is, that Obito's excuses were always true, while Kakashi's were just lies.
B.Boppolop.p chapter 7 . 12/8/2017
Ahh... poor Obito
kankananime123 chapter 7 . 12/7/2017
Love it!...heh Heeehhh naruto should call him shi-chan out of the blue and have anko around to hear. Hee heee he would never hear the end of it. Great chapter!
o0o0o0 chapter 7 . 12/7/2017
I love your cover art. Beautiful.
Sir Launcelot chapter 7 . 12/7/2017
...when you said the truth but other people get angry at you for making excuses.
this is so me
TheBeauty chapter 6 . 12/2/2017
Itachi is incorrigible :P I love him :D
Guest chapter 6 . 12/2/2017
adorable!
You give those characters so much life.
Thanks so much!
B.Boppolop.p chapter 6 . 12/1/2017
Love it! This is so cute.
And I love the insight about the little things we probably wouldn’t know otherwise, like Naruto and Sakura hair troubles from the past’s future.
Also, I think you’re right about Itachi being the bird in this situation.
Itachi and Shisui’s dynamic is adorable.
fernandfeather chapter 5 . 11/11/2017
Oh Rin :(
TheBeauty chapter 5 . 11/3/2017
I wonder why did you remove it? I did wonder how their conversations went...
TheBeauty chapter 4 . 11/3/2017
Wonderful chapter :)
avon.mendrez chapter 5 . 11/1/2017
So this is what happened. Actually I kind of hated Rin(canon) she's the reason behind the twisted personas of Obito and Kakashi. I hated that she always gets kidnapped and rescued and so what if she's a medic. Tsunade, Shisune, and heck even Sakura are all medics but they don't need to be rescued like damsel in distresses all the time. It's like why be a medic who goes in combat if you can't carry your weight around and must always be protected. But I also understood that all that tragedy she's part of must happen otherwise there won't be Naruto right.
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