Reviews for After the Rain - Drafts |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful. Oh man this is great. |
![]() ![]() ![]() AHHHHH CHIBI-SASUKE! CHIBI-SASUKE CUTENESS OVERLOAD! SOOO CUTE! I bet after Sasuke left the area, Shisui laughed about how Sasuke drew Naruto. XDDD Can't wait for more 'omakes/drafts' to come! Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() XDD this chapter is my favorite! followed by the first chapter XD I wonder who made it won? Shisui with the aid of hysteric survival instincts? Or the Yellow Flash with the aid of predator instincts? XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() XD poor Itachi! XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was so sweet :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() im saying this as a compliment! Your english is better then any Americans! Love it~~! Kept me laughing during Ghost Adventures time! Can't wait for more to come! |
![]() ![]() ![]() J'ai adoré |
![]() ![]() It so good! But I think it is ahead of the story... I was waiting for them to become a couple so long, so when I read his girlfriend it felt rather anticlimactic. Good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is glorious |
![]() ![]() ![]() Did he survive the wrath of yellow flash? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is already in the original, but I enjoyed it nonetheless |