Reviews for Dear Monika
AProudSlytherpuff chapter 4 . 6/1/2019
This had me in tears. I feel really bad for Monika, but MC has a point.
AProudSlytherpuff chapter 3 . 6/1/2019
oof this is brutally true...
superjeanfranco chapter 3 . 9/26/2018
this story is very cool
KrazyKatz117 chapter 4 . 7/9/2018
Damn, this is pretty good.
ancientdragonduelist chapter 4 . 5/31/2018
Every one of these rhymed, and every one could've been us as we played.

Damn good poems man.
Queen8Candy chapter 4 . 4/8/2018
Love it! Great poems!
calvincavern chapter 1 . 1/4/2018
Amazing work with the poems! Also...

fucking monikammmmmmmmmm
Guest chapter 4 . 12/28/2017
Yeah, my thoughts exactly going through the game. Well done.
Antoine chapter 4 . 12/27/2017
Oooh! I got chills reading this one! This was an excellent ending! I like the passion behind the protagonist's words, and I love the finality of it all. The rhyme helps it stand out really well, too! I am really glad that you decided to write for this fandom, so in that regard...

Welcome to the literature club! :D
Antoine chapter 3 . 12/27/2017
Another really good poem! The rhythm and rhyme work really well, by which I mean that the subject matter does not feel shoe-horned into it. On the contrary, it seems to flow rather naturally, and the protagonist's choice is a very realistic one.
Antoine chapter 2 . 12/27/2017
Another really well-written poem! At first, it would be weird for a person in that position to write a poem so explicitly about that experience, but then I realized that it might very well be exactly how some people would cope with such a trauma. I can really feel the emotion!
Antoine chapter 1 . 12/27/2017
The poem was really nice! It reminds me of how I felt when I started playing the game! Now that I have finished it, reading this chapter makes me think "Oh, dear."
ThatFag chapter 1 . 12/14/2017
Really like this
Echonic chapter 4 . 12/12/2017
Wow this is actually pretty good, It seems to have a lot of work put into it,
Just remember not all poems have to rhyme.
GrayK chapter 1 . 12/8/2017
I love how it progressed from "Thanks for helping my friend" to "I hope you fucking die a horrible death screaming in agony"
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