Reviews for Elementary Law
Guest chapter 30 . 7/21
he should have more respect for charlie how will he feel wen lizzie starts dating an would he be so understanding of a 15 year age gap esp pre bella he would throw a fit charlie handling it well
Guest chapter 28 . 7/20
i do love this story its about my 3rd time reading but every time i dont like edward trying to take lizzie from tanya it should be lizzies choice yes shes made mistakes but its no surprise shes kicking off now hes threatening to take her child id be anyones worse nightmare if they tried to take any of my kids and EVERY parent make mistakes ive left one of my kids at school for 20 mins once as i got my time at a meeting confused and didnt realise til i saw children walking past on there way home i ran out straight away and ive never felt so awful my son wasnt bothered the teacher kept him occupied but in a custody battle that 1 mistake would be blown out of all proportion and its unfair and edward couldnt get there either if it wasnt for bella he would of failed lizzie too
Guest chapter 30 . 7/13
Was awaiting fir you next chapter since long. Just read it. Amazing as always. Please post next soon
twilightnaley19 chapter 30 . 7/12
In a way Edward needed to say what he did, Charlie was being rude, he didn't even give Edward a chance and get to know him. Cant wait to read more. Please update soon
ellabelleellabelle chapter 30 . 7/10
I no miss this story!
lilmstran chapter 30 . 6/28
love it
BridieM chapter 30 . 6/22
I am like Edward. Always prefer truth and clarity. Dancing around and never getting to the point leaves too much room for duplicity and allows bullies to think they’ve won. So Edward’s behaviour? Well done. Thoroughly enjoyable chapter. Thank you for writing
snowystar2 chapter 30 . 6/19
Well, Edward handled that quite nicely. Trying to be respectful, still was in a way, as Charlie couldn't decide how to speak to Edward, either as a child too young or them as same/near same age group. I did notice that Charlie was already coming up with his own idea of Edward, and not taking all the info Edward gave, and so just the info that fit his already made-up idea.

Hope things get better for you in regard to real-life though!
Jpinto13749 chapter 30 . 6/19
I can't wait for the next chapter! I think Edward was 100 right to demand respect from Charlie.
bella723 chapter 30 . 6/17
I love the way Edward was frank about the conversation Charlie was trying to talk down to him and if he didn’t stop it now it would only get worse love it all
lynard69 chapter 30 . 6/17
First, Bella's reaction was absolutely normal. Anyone bringing home the unknown boyfriend for the first time will be a bit cautious and awkward. Second, THE CLIFFY! Oh my Heavens, my jaw was on the floor for the whole end of that conversation. I loved it! I cannot wait for Charlie to eat a little crow. I just hope that Renee and Bella are on Edward's side. Nothing is worse than a girl aiding the suppressor in her own suppression. She is an adult and has every right to live her life on her own terms. mistakes and all. Oh please hurry with the next chapter, I really love this story. He is the perfect Alpha male lawyer, my favorite kind to read.
snowystar2 chapter 6 . 6/17
He has good reasons to be angry though lol, all for his daughter while her mother is about herself. lol

Can get his thought with their large age differences. But so far it seemed Bella won't be that into parting, clubbing. I was never into that either, {I used to think there was something wrong with me, since I wasn't into that stuff as 'normal young ages would be' lol still not into that even now that I'm 30 this year. lol}
Rita01tx chapter 30 . 6/17
More board members everywhere should have at least one Edward who honestly has their best interests at heart LOL! As for Charlie bein' a complete ass, Edward handled that admirably...well, as far as I'm concerned.
snowystar2 chapter 4 . 6/17
Bella did the right thing! I heard stories of not-so-nice things from kids leaving with someone that wasn't on the approved list.

With my husband and I's own daughter, we won't let anyone besides, one of ourselves or my mother pick her up from school.

I know this review is well in an early chapter and we are later in but I couldn't help but leave it. Well done on the story!
QWhidbee10 chapter 30 . 6/17
I think Edward was 100% on point! Cant wait for the next chapter!
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