OK, that was stunningly deep for "Harry misses home and wants to. Celebrate Christmas".

Wonder how much real supernatural effect it will have, given the direct. Connection to winter...

First half of the chapter was great.

The second felt too forced. Even if it had a great punchline given the back story. You gave the goauld.

...

OK, I did so not see that coming.

The scholar and the fisherman, eh? Wow.

From time travel to quoting gospel, Daniel is always there...

Well, color me impressed.

Due to the extremely it wasn't quite as revolting as such things in a less... Extreme setting would be.

I still needed my cats afterwards.
Ug.

I am in awe.

You have managed to make apophis seem as something other than a true cockroach.

And "so that he had something as mad as himself to talk to, had me wake my cats in rqcious laughter... Well done.

I really like this guy with his Jaffa army of three.

One of my favorite things about this chapter is the outsized reputation Daniel has asthe Scholar, and like, it makes me think of the Doctor - who is known across the stars for bringing down empires and so on, and yet, when you meet him... Nope. Doesn't seem like the type.

It feels very fitting to the mythic, grandoise style you have going here.

I love it. I am curious as to the implications of a Goa'uld god celebrating Christmas. As has been seen in both this story and in the original Dresden Files, Angels at least are real. I wonder if Metatron will show up again.

thiry jaffa, or thirty?

A monster who what?

Harry is making the Goa'uld celebrate Christmas. They're all sitting there trying to figure out what his scheme is and what he gets out of this while he's building snowmen and playing with the kids... I can't stop laughing. This is great.

This is the one of the best Christmas stories EVER.

Reading so many perspectives is really rewarding. *Thumbs up!*

I really like Nefertum. And you characters, intrigues and plots are wonderfully intricate. If I have already said that - it bear saying twice.