Reviews for Deception |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I know it has been many years since an update, but you left me hanging. Please come back and finish this. |
![]() ![]() Please, you cant leave his hanging now! |
![]() ![]() Okay,I know you probably Wrote this story a long or while ago,but can you please write the next chapter and well finish the Fic if you can?Also can you tell me the RANDOM things he says to you if you don't mind?;) |
![]() ![]() Wow. that last chapter was great. but seto was a bit creepy near the end. isn't he supposed to be on a flight? stunt double 0.o |
![]() ![]() ![]() 'currently drooling over seto's hot bod creating a puddle on the floor' |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey this is a good story, update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() continue! update plz? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update! You haven't updated this story in so long! Don't give up on it! I absolutely adore this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey awsome fic! Playing Seto Kiaba is hard but you got him down to a tea! This is really cool! Please keep writting! I want to know what Gozburo has planned for Tea. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was amazing. It had so many layers...I loved when Kaiba raised that toast mockingly in a blend of bitter humor and then have the same action thrown back at him. And Lola...I never thought I would like a woman like her, but she's amusing with a cig in one hand and champagne in the other. Haha "sexy an sin." That was a great line. And thanks for not losing their characters. Tea's still naive but stubborn, Kaiba's a somwhat nicer jerk, and his father...haha. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool...nice! |
![]() ![]() ![]() plz update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE IT! |