Reviews for Alyss's Return |
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Guest chapter 3 . 1/20 looooooooooooooooooooooove it. I really wish it was real. When they said Alyss died I teared up. Thank You |
Sephenia chapter 3 . 12/10/2022 This was good! I enjoyed reading it. :) |
RangerAlyss chapter 3 . 2/15/2021 I love this so much. I cried when Alyss died and to see that you have written a story where she survives lovely. Normally I hate when people write fanfics that have no respect for the authors choices and writing, but this is a different matter. I love this so much. |
Guest chapter 3 . 10/27/2018 This is pretty good! but I think u should have Will be a little more exited and shocked to see Alyss. she was "dead" for TWO YEARS I would have been like a mix of shock, anger, excitement, etc... otherwise I love it and can't wait for the next chapter! |
Rue-Ren chapter 1 . 9/10/2018 the Wilyss moment omg |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/27/2018 There are so many hidden PJatO references in this I don't even know where to start |
Lora Kael chapter 3 . 12/3/2017 I must say I enjoyed the first chapter, but thought the reaction chapters were unnecessary. Not bad, just unnecessary for the story. Chapter 1 stands very well on its own. Do keep writing. :) Love Lora |
Guest chapter 3 . 11/30/2017 Besides the language, I loved it. |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/30/2017 I never thought Alyss to act like this, but it was an interesting way to portray her character. |
Guest chapter 3 . 11/27/2017 I will be making an account soon I would love to collab will review again when I've made the account. |
Computia chapter 1 . 11/29/2017 Hi! First off can i just say that this Fanfiction is amazing! Loved it! I was wondering if you wanted to collaborate i have some ideas for a Fanfic and was wondering if you might want to help write them! Or if not could you read over them before I post them and see what you think! I literally just made this account today and I am major noob who loves tow rite and daydreams 24/7! Anyway please let me know if you're keen to work on something with me! I should be on about everyday. |
The Wise Dragoness chapter 3 . 11/27/2017 I absolutely love it! Can't wait to see Cassandra scold Alyss while hugging the life out of her. :) |
AreiaCannaid chapter 3 . 11/21/2017 Its great! I really liked this chapter. Cassandra's letter was hilarious. Thank you so much for writing this! Beauty and the Beast, is it? Anyways thanks again-and good luck with your next writing project! |
Ranger Wyatt chapter 3 . 11/21/2017 "WHERE THE BLIND, BLUE, BLITHERING BLAZES HAVE YOU BEEN?" lol :) great story! bye |
Guest chapter 2 . 11/9/2017 Very good and reasonable premise you should continue |