Reviews for Alyss's Return
Guest chapter 3 . 1/20
looooooooooooooooooooooove it. I really wish it was real. When they said Alyss died I teared up. Thank You
Sephenia chapter 3 . 12/10/2022
This was good! I enjoyed reading it. :)
RangerAlyss chapter 3 . 2/15/2021
I love this so much. I cried when Alyss died and to see that you have written a story where she survives lovely. Normally I hate when people write fanfics that have no respect for the authors choices and writing, but this is a different matter. I love this so much.
Guest chapter 3 . 10/27/2018
This is pretty good! but I think u should have Will be a little more exited and shocked to see Alyss. she was "dead" for TWO YEARS I would have been like a mix of shock, anger, excitement, etc... otherwise I love it and can't wait for the next chapter!
Rue-Ren chapter 1 . 9/10/2018
the Wilyss moment omg
Guest chapter 1 . 7/27/2018
There are so many hidden PJatO references in this I don't even know where to start
Lora Kael chapter 3 . 12/3/2017
I must say I enjoyed the first chapter, but thought the reaction chapters were unnecessary. Not bad, just unnecessary for the story. Chapter 1 stands very well on its own.

Do keep writing. :)

Love Lora
Guest chapter 3 . 11/30/2017
Besides the language, I loved it.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/30/2017
I never thought Alyss to act like this, but it was an interesting way to portray her character.
Guest chapter 3 . 11/27/2017
I will be making an account soon I would love to collab will review again when I've made the account.
Computia chapter 1 . 11/29/2017
Hi!
First off can i just say that this Fanfiction is amazing! Loved it! I was wondering if you wanted to collaborate i have some ideas for a Fanfic and was wondering if you might want to help write them! Or if not could you read over them before I post them and see what you think! I literally just made this account today and I am major noob who loves tow rite and daydreams 24/7! Anyway please let me know if you're keen to work on something with me! I should be on about everyday.
The Wise Dragoness chapter 3 . 11/27/2017
I absolutely love it! Can't wait to see Cassandra scold Alyss while hugging the life out of her. :)
AreiaCannaid chapter 3 . 11/21/2017
Its great! I really liked this chapter. Cassandra's letter was hilarious. Thank you so much for writing this!

Beauty and the Beast, is it?

Anyways thanks again-and good luck with your next writing project!
Ranger Wyatt chapter 3 . 11/21/2017
"WHERE THE BLIND, BLUE, BLITHERING BLAZES HAVE YOU BEEN?"
lol :) great story! bye
Guest chapter 2 . 11/9/2017
Very good and reasonable premise you should continue
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