Reviews for Pieces
MetaphoricallyAlive chapter 3 . 7/8/2021
This fic is not bad. It's just, the characters feel OOC and I can't enjoy this after reading something like "Mea Culpa Mea Culpa".

But, it still is a good fic, because if I read this before readin then I would have enjoyed this
455 chapter 5 . 5/21/2021
From the 6 years of hardships, I expected wisdom. But, no. This 'thing' has no wisdom at all. He is behaving like a fucktard. And.. do you have a thing for being submissive? IMO, the MC in a story portrays a part of the author, whether it is the behavior or the way the author wants to be. So, going by that fact..

Well.. YKWIM.
Cauldronw chapter 17 . 4/12/2021
Huw
Cauldronw chapter 15 . 4/12/2021
Whew
Cauldronw chapter 10 . 4/10/2021
Hmm nice work writer
OtakuCruz chapter 19 . 4/11/2021
amazing
Elsuperchango chapter 19 . 3/29/2021
Please comeback
Amit chapter 19 . 3/24/2021
Hi can you please keep writing it is so good
GalanthaDreams chapter 19 . 3/6/2021
This is a solidly written story, I look forward to watch you send us next.
that one random chapter 17 . 2/23/2021
this needs to be continued it is super good
Lena chapter 19 . 2/21/2021
hi I really like your story i was kinda scared at first that it would be too romance centered but its actually exactly the right amount. Cant wait to see what happen next :)
TheMist33 chapter 19 . 2/21/2021
You should continue this story, very good, need more Touken moments too
Guest chapter 4 . 2/15/2021
This freaking amazing!
joshyypants chapter 19 . 2/16/2021
pls comeback :(
LoudHaddock5725 chapter 1 . 1/31/2021
wait so touka out ran a fucking nuke?
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