I have to say that while short (lol not to you who had to write it!), it is one of the top 5 stories I've read in the HP universe.

Your pairing did nothing over the top to come together which seems to be trending for all pairings including Ginny.

Your use of runes and blacksmithing was well balanced and made rational sense. That two muggle raised students, one a clever and intelligent young lady, created something simple that no wizard raised would consider based on imagination and ingenuity was believable and sane.

Thank you for sharing and I hope your other stories turned out as well.

It's a good thing you opened her eyes a bit sooner as well Canon was stupid that way. Granted we know why now thanks to interviews byJKR.

Green Lantern via synthetic magical crystal that acts like a focus would probably work out well in the HP universe too, could probably work out how to do all the elemental type stuff too like Storm, Thor and possibly even Johnny from the Fantastic Four (probably the three others from there too considering invisibility and stretching is a thing via metamorphagus abilities) running flames, lightning and such over the casters body without causing damage would probably require heavy 'intent' not to harm anything that's not hostile though.

Thank you so much for this incredible story, I really appreciate all the hard work you put into creating this story. I look forward to reading more of your works. Please Keep the awesome work.

Well done to Hermione and Harry! She really is a very bright witch, to figure out all the protective runes and spells to help Harry achieve what he must!

An Iron armour was a cool idea, but I think it could have been better implemented... T_T

As someone who has worm several kinds of armor suits, from different eras and regions, i can safely say that the popular belief that they are difficult to move in and you can't get up on your own are complete and total bullocks. A knight who got knocked down would be at his enemies mercy if it were true, and nobody would willingly wear such a suit. Not only does a well fit suit of armor not impede your movement, but it is just as easy to get up off the ground as if not wearing armor. I have even seen people kip-up in full kit.

Good story otherwise, and I look forward to reading more. Speaking of...

Loved this, 10/10

nice story, thank you for sharing!

Thanks for a great (re)read!

Great job!yes! Now to kill Malfoy, save Narcissa, kill Tom, kick Dumbledore in the ass, marry Hermione Granger and live happily ever after!

Great job! Kill them all!

Great job!Be very,very quiet! I’m hunting Crabbe’s,Goyles and Malfoys!

Great job!Might want to put sharp knuckles on the hands so he can do more damage when punching!

You write very well. I have no suggestions but am a bit disappointed not to find out why Fawkes should not have those peppers !