Very satisfying. Very well written. Great job.

Hmm, can't believe I missed this gem on my first go-round of your fics. Can't wait to read the rest!

Please write more. Wendy

Hi, I read thesse stories a while back and didn't know about reviewing. They're great stories. Will you continue with the storyline. I would like to see Joe and Miya get married. I know at the end he sort of proposes. I love the whole storyline. It's great. Please do more. Wendy

Tried to send you this directly by the *&% mail server at work bounced it back...

I just wanted to drop you a line about your 'fic - excellent, excellent work. I remember Battle of the Planets from when I was in my early teens. Unfortunately, the TV station ended up yanking it because of some parents' group complaining it was a: too violent (a complaint I can understand); b: promoted cults (a complaint that's an insult to every viewer with three active brain cells).

I don't find Miyae to be a Mary-Sue - she doesn't match the full profile. Yes, she is an OC, yes she is related to and a love interest for two canon characters, but that's it. She's not better than they are at what they do. She isn't a prodigy at everything she tries. She isn't a paragon of perfection. She's human, and no Mary-Sue really is.

Good plot, excellent dialogue, believable characterization - it's all there. I only wish there was more of it.

I've been writing 'fic since 1998 or so (X-Men comic, Buffy), and inspired by a story I found called "Condor Cravings" (in which Joe has a yearning for some Italian food, but is thwarted in his every turn to obtain some), and a scene from "Little Earthquakes", as well as my own interest in cooking, I found myself wondering if Miya would ever attempt to learn some basic Italian cooking to surprise him. Maybe one day I'll find out (hint, hint ;-)

Warmest wishes,

Elena Zovatto

This was a great story~! You're idea was really creative! Your writing skills are also up there~ Haha~! Well done! *applaud and cheers* _