Yeah, i never really liked Arkos. Blame it on Jaune being dense or something but in the end its a one sided hope from Pyrrha. The fandom makes her worse by making her a yandere for some reason. But hey im here for Neo mostly so thank you for the way you write her so far.

i was doubtful that you would, but intrigued that you man. and you delivered pretty good. was hoping for more of a poly then a harem but meh, ill take what i can get

Man, this was absolutely fantastic! Thought it was an odd ship tag and well, it is… But it is so well written and well done that I found myself absolutely loving it all the way through!

Thank you for writing this! It was excellent!

This was great it was beautiful.

Man I really enjoyed this story. Neo's character development arc has been a delight, as has Blake's journey to move on from Adam and even Pyrrha's story arc of finally being honest with Jaune and willing to stop having control of the situation

I think Neo's arc is the most interesting because she is the one with the least reason to make the decisions she did and to forgive the people she did, yet she does it anyways showing the biggest shift in character from the beginning of the story.

Either way, I rather like how things played out here though obviously facing Tyrian Hazel Watts is a different beast than facing Cinder and her lackies. Granted, having the CCT up, atlas and white fang exonerated, and still retaining the maiden powers plus almost all of their strong huntsman, but I feel like combat wise Tyrian isn't someone you can beat just by using the maiden's powers given he can be deadly if they rely on aura alone.

Anyways I really enjoyed this and it's been a whirlwind of emotions as the characters bounce around and come to terms with their feelings both positive and negative.

Man this was such a good chapter, between all three separating their consciousness, learning of each other, and Neo showing maturity and development as she gives up her desire for revenge and decides to just enjoy Jaune

The dragon being slain was epic, and the reveal of the maidens was entertaining though I'm still puzzled why Salem is happy, it feels like she's happy because Ozpin lost even if the world won, because his shit plans and attempts at secrecy have failed

Oh snap, I love how Jaune pulled the three together after that tense face off

It makes a lot of sense that given how cocky Cinder is and how versatile these three are, they combined with a sacrificial tank jaune could get one over on cinder especially since cinder wouldn't go all out til it was too late and risky like a typical bad villain boss who wants to gloat and marinate in her power

LOl complications all around, Pyrrha torn up by guilt, Jaune just confused, and Blake just trying to be a branch in the wind

Oh shit, Neo's gonna be so sad and depressed, fucking Pyrrha

Pyrrha gets confirmation and Jaune finally puts his mouth where his mind is with Neo ;)

I feel so bad for Blake, but at the same time she appears to be maturing. She's also clearly starting to realize she really does have feelings for Jaune

Meanwhile Blake is also suspicious of Neo now and Pyrrha finally gets rewarded for her patience, though I'm sure she'll go full yandere mode soon enough if Blake reveals her feelings

Lmfao at pyrrha's advice translating to jaune speaking to blake about his feelings for neo and weiss which she interprets to be for herself.

What a chapter, was dying imagining Pyrrha's reaction

Pyrrha getting all protective, Blake getting confused between Jaune and Sun, and Neo getting more emotionally tied to jaune, I love it

Blake's dazed and confused, Pyrrha's getting more possessive and yandere, and Neo is melting like a sundae left in the sun ;)

Blake is totally perplexed by Jaune and drawing him, not Sun

If it had abs, then its sun, if theres no abs or tail its jaune

Love neo's slow burn intrigue while Pyrrha goes yandere jealousy mode lol