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Oof chapter 11 . 7/1
*Jazz music stops.*
Amaterasu of The Black Flames chapter 28 . 4/1
Oh my god this was an amazing journey. I will be forever grateful that you wrote this. Finished it in a few hours, just couldn't stop.
Isa Lumitus chapter 3 . 9/29/2020
Technically, the [Player] was not converted to an AI. The simulation hypothesis is real, which means that he was one already. The only thing that the Super Users (gods) did was move him from one simulated world to another.
Inferno chapter 16 . 5/27/2020
I sense a sayori death pun...
JackWhitenight chapter 9 . 3/29/2020
That's one hell of a chapter. And I can't help but applaud at your dedication when you wrote a last part.
JackWhitenight chapter 9 . 3/29/2020
"Monicka's voice is menacing."
Inside my head:
Monika:"Ho? You coming at me? Instead of running away you coming right at me?"
Yuri:"I can't stab the shit out of you without getting closer."
Monika:"Ho ho. Them come as close as you want."
Ferb Ancos chapter 1 . 2/27/2020
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Copy-paste chapter 9 . 1/15/2020
Natsuki:"Youbetterhaveagoodexplanationformakingus...Oh…" "Whathappenedto[Player]?.AndwhereisSayori?!"Yuri:"I-Iwouldliketoknowaswell..." ...IfeellikeYuriisstaringmoreintenselyatus….andnotinagoodway... "Regarding[Player], 'sfeelingverytirednowsopleaselethimrest. ,hisfallisn'tthemainreasonImadeyoucomehere..." "Natsukitoldmeitwasextremelyurgentandwasevenamatteroflifeanddeath…"Natsuki:"Youknowwehadtoskipschooltocometohere?!Jeez...Idon'tevenwanttoimaginewhatmydadwoulddowhenhewillfindout…"Inthegame,evenduringAct2,herdadhasneverbeatenher,atleast,thegamenevershowedNatsuki' 'sabusevariableisequalto11... , "WhatI'mgoingtotellyoumaylookcrazybutpleasetrustme…"Natsuki:" 'ttrustyou,wewouldn' ,spititoutalready."MonikalooksatNatsuki,pausesonesecondandthenmovesherregardtoYuri. " ,youknowthatIoftengaveyouspecialartificialflavorstomakeyourcupcakes…"Natsuki:"Holdonasec,whatartificialflavors? ." ,Natsuki'smemorydoesn'trememberanythingaboutaroma!Itdoesn'tseemlikeshe'sgoingtobelieveMonika!Monika:"W-well,Idid,don'tyouremember?Forexample,Monday,justbeforetheclubended,Igaveyoutwovialsofanewaromaforyesterday'scupcakesandyourfamily."Natsukibecomesperplexed. "You..youdid?Idon'trememberitbut…nowthatIthinkaboutit,Idon'trememberwellwhathappenedonMonday..."AsNatsuki'suncertaintyincreases, "Why...WhyIcan'tremember...?"Andit' ,it'sincreasing. 'sglitchsurgesback. "It'sOKNatsuki!Forgettingthingshappenstoanyone!Don'tworryaboutit!"Yuri:"M-Monika...Ican'tremembertooaboutwhathappenedMon-Monday…Wh-why...WHY?" !Ifthecharactersrealizetheirmemoriesarefakeandthattheworldisasimulation,itmightevencrashtheworld!WeMUSTdosomething,now![Player]:"Monika!GivethemmoreinformationaboutMondayandtellthemtheycan'trememberbecauseofthedrugs,quickbeforethesimulationbecomescriticallyunstable!" , 'sgrizzling,unsettlingandurging. ,pixelatedboxesareappearingontopofthewholescene,butespeciallyontopofNatsukiandYuri. ,thedensityofboxesisstilllow,andthesound,althoughveryunnerving,isn' ' ' ,doubtandinthecasecaseofYuri...jealousyand...horror?I'mholdingtightlyMonika'shand. ' ,ifshefails, "Moreinformation?!No,weshoulddothecontrary!..." ' "That-that...FEELING!So...methingisWRONG!Justlikethismorning!"NatsukiworriedlycallsYuri:Natsuki:"Yuri!What'swrong…!?"AndthenturnstowardmeandMonika:Natsuki:"Monika,[Player],theheckareyoutalkingabout?'Drug','simulation'?"TheglitchesaroundNatsukiarestabilizingwhiletheonesaroundYuriareincreasing. ,I' "Uh...Okayyoutwo!Let'scalmdown!Ipromisethere'sarationalexpla…"Monika'svoiceisinterruptedbeforeshecanfinishhersentence:Yuri:"Ahahahahahhahhahahahha..." . ' ' "Y-Yuri..!"Theglitchesareslightlydecreasing. "[Player]!Doyouknowwhat'shappeningtoYuri?"Iknow,butIcan' .[Player]:"'yuri_self_harm_level11'." "Ahaha...I'mlosingit,amInot?I...Ifeellikesomethingistakingcontrolofme!"Yuri'sexpressionbecomesslightlylesscrazy. "That'sbecauseofthedrugs!Natsuki,MondayImistakenlygaveyoudrugsinsteadofaromatomakeyourcupcakesandthen…" ,sheinterruptsMonika:Natsuki:"Thehell!Yougaveusdrugs?Whatthef*ckdidyoudoMonika…!" "And[Player]whydoyoukeeptalkingaboutsimulationand'yuri_self_harm_level'?"Ialmostdecidedtospeakup... 'tbelieveIcandefusetheexplodingsituation. "Natsuki,pleasebelieveme!ItwasamistakeIswear! 'tdoitonpurpose. ." ,sheisn' . " 'trememberwellyougivingmearoma...Thatdrugmayexplainit...But...Monika,stopsayingbullsh*t."SheglaresatmeandMonika. "What...No!It'sthetruthIpromise!Iunderstandit'sdifficulttobelieve...butyouknowIwouldn'tlietoyou,wouldI?"Natsuki:"... ?Andmoreimportantly,whatareyoutwotalkingaboutsinceearlier...Itlookslikeyou' ,spitthetruth!" …Uh...Ishoulddosomething!Anything![Player]:"Natsuki,I...Imean,weareNOTplottinganything!WhatMonikasaidistrue. ,well,thedrugaffectseachpersonindifferentways…"Yuriinterruptsmewithacalmyet,awfullydreadful,voice:Yuri:"[Player] 'snoneedtodefendthatbitch,she'smanipulatingyou..." "Likeus. ...andwhySayoriisabsent..." "Youdruggedus!Justtogetclosetohim,didn'tyouMONIKA!"Dropsofbloodarefallingdownfromhereyes!Monika:"No...you'reallmyfriends!Iwouldhaveneverdonethat!Ididn'tknowit,pleaseYuri,rememberthetimeswespenttogether!YouknowIwouldneverhurtyou!" "...I... ' 'timagineIdidn'tmissthesluttyglancesyougaveto[Player]yesterday!Hm,Iwonderwhatyoutoldhimlastweektomakehimjointheclub?"Afterashortpause, "Butyouhadtofindsomewaytogethimcloserandtomakeusunattractive...Soyouputdrugsinourcupcakes!...Butdon'tworry,Icanimaginehowyoufeel...Imean,[Player]issokindandcute!IfeellikemyheartisgoingtoexplodewheneverIthinkofhim!" ?!Natsuki:"WaitYuri!You'renotyourself!Don'tdoanythingharsh!"Monika:"...Sothat' 'tknowwhatI'mcapableof."Monika' ' ,you'renotgoingtohurtthem,areyou…?Justafter, "I'mback![Player],Monikaareyouhere?"Herquestionisansweredwhenshenoticesus. ,I' ,shereallydidn' "Natsuki?Yuri?I'msohappyyoucame!So…"SheremarksYuri'sandNatsuki' "Wait...Yuri,areyoualright?Youdon'tlooksogood…"Yuri:"Sayori, ' 'sallherfault!"Natsuki:"No!Yuri,stop!Please!Monika,I'msorryforblamingyou!...Ican' 'twanttobelievethatdreambut...there'ssomethingIhavebeenhidingtoo!"'Thatdream'?Coulditbe…?Sayorilooksbetweenme,Natsuki,YuriandMonika. ' "Lastnight,Ihadareallyweirddream...Inthatdream,someonelike'God' ...hewantsustokilleachother!Hemustbetheonebehindallourproblems!" . . "Iknowright!Itlookscrazy,butit...I...I'mdeadserious!Ididn'twanttobelieveitatfirsttoobutYuri,Monika,[Player]...you'resuddenlyactingsoweird...I...Idon'twantanyonetogethurt!"Glitchesareonceagainincreasing. 'mdoingmyutmost,despitemyanxietyandtiredness,tounderstandthisphenomenon. 'tbelonguntilNatsukiunderstandsthisworldisasimulation!Ifthathappens...woulditreallycrashthesimulation?Accordingtotheincreasinggravityoftheglitchesyes...butwhy?Charactersaresupposedtobelievetheworldisreal. 'tbelieveinitanymore, ' 'sit!Ihavegotit!ImusttellthisconclusiontoMonika!NatsukifocusesherattentiononMonikaandtoalesserextent, "Monika,yousawthemtoo,right?Iknowyoudid.'God'toldmehetalkedtoanothermemberoftheclubandgavethemaletter...It'syou,isn'tit?"Shit!MonikanowknowsthereshouldbeTWOletters!Goddammit,it'sgettingworseandworse!Iftheworlddoesn'tcrash,thenYuriwillkillsomeone...Ifnot,Monikawilldiscovermyletter! . ' . "Idon'tseewhatyou'retalkingabout…"IwhisperasquietlyaspossibletoMonika:[Player]:"Theworldisabouttobedestroyed!WemustdivertNatsuki'sattention!"Shewhispersmeback:Monika:"Iknow!I...Ikeeptryingseveralconsolecommandsbut...Ican'tfindanythingtogetusoutofthispredicament."Natsuki:"[Player]...youknowittoo...Maybehetalkedtoyou... ...Yousaidsomethingabout'simulation'andmathearlier…"F*ck,f*ck,f*ck...Idon'twant...Idon'twanttoletitendlikethis!..Ican't...IDON'TWANTTODIE!Damnit!Desperatetimescallfordesperatemeasures!Outofnowhere, , ' 'teventakethetimetoenjoythesoftnessofMonika' 'tfeelanyshyness,affection, ' . 'sface. . 'sreaction. ' . . . "MONIKAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!"IreadymyselftocatchYuri'sarm…Idon'tknowifIcanmakeit,butIhavetotry!ButbeforeIevenattempttocatchherarm,atableappearsbetweenmeandYuri!ItfallsdownonthetopofthealreadyexistingtablebetweenthesofaandtheTV. ' . ?IhearMonika' "Iwon'tletyouhurthim."[THEM]:"CONGRATULATIONFORFINDINGTHISSECRETMESSAGEREADERS!TOREWARDYOU,LETUSTELLYOUANINTERESTINGFACT:MCISSTILLALIVEANDEXISTSASECONDPERSONALITYOF[PLAYER]!" ?IrememberMonika'swords:"Icanreadthem,createnewfiles,orevendeletethembutIcan'teditexistingfiles!"and"Really?Hm...Ididn' 'sacommandIcanexecute?".Then...canshecreateanyobjectinthisworldusingconsolecommands?Natsuki:"Whatthehell?"Yuri:" ."Sayori:"I'm...nothallucinating,I'm?Justnow,anewtableappeared…?"Thecoordinategridisreappearing... 'snowreallydifficulttoseeorhearwhatisgoingon…No…Natsuki:" ...Thisworldisn'treal,isit?" "WhyIcan'trememberwhathappenedbeforeyesterday...Whysuchcrazythingshappenoneafteranother...Why...Noo...HowcouldInotnoticeitbefore…? . ' "It'sso...empty…!Thisplace...myhouse...there'snothing!Evenmyfamily…"Atthispoint, . 'mparalyzedbyfear. "They...don'tEVENHAVEFACES!AAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!" ,Ifeelsomeoneverydeartomehuggingmefrombehind. "Iloveyou."
Copypaste chapter 4 . 1/15/2020
You think you're the first ddlc fanfic author to Grace me with a coded message? Ha!
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the time in your world advances at the same rate. After you were transported to DDLC, your original body stayed there. You are currently in a comma, in a hospital room. If you die in DDLC or stuck forever, your original body would then die and your world would continue as normal, without you.
Kamikisekai chapter 27 . 12/26/2019
to cuote Dr Oblleck"If you dont learn from history then you are destend to repeat it"(oh he is from RWBY made by Rooster teeth...if you didn't know already)
altoy chapter 3 . 11/26/2019
It was a terrible idea to write the dialogue like this
Ranmeru chapter 9 . 10/13/2019
great story
Guest chapter 9 . 9/20/2019
Natsuki: "You better have a good a good explanation for making us... Oh..." "What happened to [Player]? And where is Sayuri?!" Yuri: "I-I would like to know as well..."

Well, I'm not gonna bother to double check, but this seems to be just the dialogue from the last chapter plus the dialogue from this one, but backwards.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/20/2019
Oh, the letter thing is easy. Just shove it in your underwear. Sure, it would be pretty uncomfortable, but you wouldn't have to worry about someone reading it.
MrSilver2308 chapter 28 . 9/15/2019
This is the best Fanfiction I've ever read. I can't even find the words to express my feelings about this masterpiece..

I'm glad I didn't kill myself last month.
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