|Reviews for in the daytime they slither, slow|
| potahtopotato chapter 1 . 6/11
This is so cool. Oh my god. You gave me chills reading about Flobberworms, of all things, and that's ridiculous. This whole story is ridiculous, but in the best way possible.
Are they actually dragons? I'm not totally sure, but I think you might be implying that the students of Hogwarts were complaining about taking care of actual dragons, which, even though they wouldn't know that they're dragons, is super typical.
Or maybe they're some other kind of mythical creature?
IDK, I just really enjoy the idea of there being incredibly dangerous, terrifying creatures in the Wizarding World that no one knows about.
| G12G4 chapter 1 . 11/14/2017
It's a fun concept with a good execution. It doesn't meet the competition length requirement, but I like it. The pace is well done though the final sections regarding the unicorns are a little thin on content, like you were rushing. Maybe it would be good to revisit that part a bit.
| antarcticas chapter 1 . 11/4/2017
i've never really thought abuot flobberworms - this is really good!