Omg I just started reading this... Dang from 2017?! Eh, doesn't matter, great writing shows anyways. I love this so much!

Oh come on! I hate reading discord without resolveLove your OCs btw

You did NOT just leave us on a cliff hanger for roughly 4 years. I jus- how- what- it's so addictive to read this story, and it just ended. When I saw 181k words I assumed it was finished especially since it's been roughly four years since it was updated, but holy shit, no it was a cliffhanger. If you're still alive after 2020 I cannot wait for this to continue, like I'm so so so sad it stopped.

does this mean Finn will find out about the brothers? i hope not, i dont like this idea. oh well. hey grat story so far i love how your OC have a very interesting backstory. i especially love Azure... although i do hope they meet some friendly canon characters soon...

Que tension

Please update soon you have no idea how many people are over here freaking out cause of that cliffhanger

Oh please oh please do not just leave us on a cliffhanger and then leave for 2 years that's cruel

*deep breath* I... am trying so hard not to scream lol With like love for this fucking fic.

Firstly, not a dig, I know it's been a hot minute since this has been updated which is totally fine, no pressure, I'm just happy this is posted at all. But I wanted to say that I hope you're okay because now any time I see a fic last updated in 2019 or god forbid 2020 I'm just -yikes emoji- I really hope you survived the plague. I hope everything's okay or at least calming down for you.

Okay! On to the actual review!

HOLY SHIT.

HOLY SHIT.

WHAT A FUCKING CLIFFHANGER. YOU CAN'T D O THIS TO ME PLEASE. I'M BEGGING YOU. SO MUCH IS HAPPENING I'M GONNA HAVE A FUCKING ANUERYSM.

I opened this fic, and I'm going to be very honest, without a lot of expectations mostly cause nothing I've read for time travel in one piece has really matched what I was looking for.

THIS FIC HAS EVERYTHING I DIDN'T EVEN *KNOW* I WAS LOOKING FOR. HOLY SHIT. I adore your ocs, I love the dynamic you've given the brothers, how not everything's okay just cause they got this second chance. They were still adults in their last life and all had their own goals (particularly Sabo) and issues that have definitely carried over.

I'm sorry but also, I'll come back to your ocs but I CAUGHT. SABO. NOT BEING CONCERNED ABOUT NOT REMEMBERING RAFTEL. THAT'S! NOT! FUCKING! NORMAL! WHAT HAPPENED!? WHAT'S GOING ON!?

The end of this chapter made my gut feeling even more fucking valid! Luffy seems devastated by his brothers extremely serious fight but also, his adult self... was so tired;;; sunny being a weapon? Nami in the past tense... does Luffy actually remember this and hides it? But I don't think that's it cause if he did, Sabo would remember too right? Unless he wished that Sabo didn't... that they didn't? But I don't think Luffy would do that.

THIS IS LIKE. REALLY HARD TO THINK ABOUT AND I LOVE YOU FOR IT I CANNOT WAIT TO SEE WHERE THIS GOES.

Okay, before getting to the ocs. Law QwQ Law in the last chapter made me so fucking soft. Let this kid have happiness in his life for fucking once, it was so beautiful to see.

Also, I *love* how Smoker ended up joining the crew. I was wondering if you were heading there as I read but I am SO happy you actually did it! I love how you write him so far! (Though I am very intrigued to see where he is during this assault on the Tigris)
OKAY ON THE LIST.

FAVORITE OC: FINN! I love his character development and his dynamic with Law and I'm eager to see how his Devil Fruit (specifically the let's see regrets part. Don't worry, it didn't get past me that we haven't seen Luffy's yet. I feel that one's gonna be a BIG reveal) might be useful in battle

Azure's inner conflict right now is *delicious* and like so genuinely heartbreaking.

I can't remember all of your questions at the end of this chapter atm, but imo, downsizing the crew might be a better idea? Like, it's cool to know they got this bigger crew once, but most of the core characters of your story haven't really changed? (By that I mean, Azure, Amaryllis, Ivy, Zander, Beckett, Goode, etc) And the only true oc I can remember from their gathering arc on the island is Cameron (of the not main crew I mean.)

I'm sorry;;; I don't mean this rudely, it's just my vote? If the extras aren't really adding anything to the story, then maybe it's not really necessary for them to be there?

But it's your story! If you want them to be there! Have them stay! Ultimately you're the author and you have to enjoy what you write or why would you be writing it right?

Sabo not having a Devil Fruit is perfect! The Mera Mera no MI suits him so well it doesn't seem right for him to have anything else and certainly everyone would be ') devastated for him to get it a second time here. Besides, he's fucking skfjskfja terrifying without a fruit. Let his brothers have fruits to make up for their more impulse driven brains cause a fruit and a braincell seems a devastating combination.

I'm so genuinely excited to see where this will go! And even if you never update again thank you so so much for posting this! I've had the time of my life reading it and I think it'll live low-key in my brain for forever now every time I think about one piece lol!

I hope you have a marvelous day you magnificent being!

(Ah but also, I haven't really checked yet, but you may want to consider also uploading this to ao3? I think it'd be very popular but also;;; ff has me kinda nervous and I'd hate to lose this fic to the void but it's up to you! If you already have or don't want to go ahead and disregard this, sorry for the trouble lol)

Tbh i love the young dragon instead of straw hat luffy hahahahah but pirate prince is abit yucky HAHAHAH agreeibg with Ace his firefist soubded coolerr

Ahhh i want the world to know about their crew alreadyyy like the name and the 3 tiny captainsss 33

Omg that scene where he won't let him go I'm likee LET HIM GOOOOOO let him have a scene hahaha

I'm happy that in this fic Ace is more accepting of his fatger 33 But i want Luffy and Sabo to be introduced to the world tooo Come on come onnnn Can't waittt

This is an absolutely incredible story! I really hope that you continue it at some point!

Yesssssss ace

Ace's words were really harsh, and Sabo also reciprocated poor Luffy
Will you complete the story? Already two years have passed since the last update? Please do not stop here