Reviews for Up Yours Dumbles
Foolgod chapter 7 . 9/5
why are they tolerating the order presence at all? they can teleport as demonstrated by Snape what do you mean they cant leave cause of the storm?
Foolgod chapter 5 . 9/5
why is he using so many muggle methods for everything? did he not just spend 15 months learning everything magic that he needed. Like I can get the hobbies and hunting but cutting wood? really? also the repairing charm could be used for all lot of this stuff as well.
Foolgod chapter 5 . 9/5
they are learning to repair vehicles and have MAGIC so why do they need the "maximum insurance"
Foolgod chapter 4 . 9/5
how are they able to come and go through the time dilation like that?
Foolgod chapter 2 . 9/5
if the the goblins have access to the type of magic used in a time dilation room why are they not treated better. also why does Lily know about it and why do the goblins even want to help?
Foolgod chapter 2 . 9/5
not saying that they wouldn't agree to this but like, no complaints at all seriously? As a pure blood even if they are the better sort they probably have some sort of thoughts of being able to it by themselves. The letters couldn't have possibly accounted for everything so the Greengrass's should at least want to make some adjustments.
EkaterinaSteele chapter 10 . 9/3
enjoyed this story!
Hadrian Evan's Mikaelson chapter 10 . 8/18
OMG that was a really good Story
Brenda Young chapter 1 . 8/10
I really enjoy this story and I will continue to read as long as it stays.

I do have one problem with the last chapter, the math on the death of Daphne and Harry doesn't work, they were both born in 1980 and died in 2112, that makes them 132 not 124 as stated.
Mando-Vet chapter 10 . 8/10
Wonderful story!
fvdv123 chapter 10 . 8/5
This is still one of my favorite stories
lastgodofwar chapter 9 . 7/29
This was well written interesting take on the harry potter story. I dont think its my cup of tea but i read all the way til just before the last chapter. I have a huge problem with a story about a magical world where GUNS are the answer to the problem and the best weapon to easily kill magicals. And this is coming for a gun owning texan. I mean if that's true why even have a magical story about harry potter why even have him use magic. The only time I have loved when that trope is used is when Harry gets kicked out of the magical world or loses his magic and then becomes a badass soldier and kills voldemort with a sniper. But in this story you had him learn all manor of cool magic and had him be a prodigy in all sorts of cool magicks... and then he uses a gun. That coupled with the road trip full of lists of thing they do like they go here and talk to this person then they go here and talk to this person it became a list of actions rather than a story of what sounded like a really cool road trip. That and while i felt okay with daph and harry's relationship i thought you could have had more examples of there love become real their romance was kinda like a lukewarm build up that never really paid off. But i absolutely loved the beginning of this story and setup I just thought we would get to see harry use more magic maybe become an auror in america or a teacher or enchanter or something. I also think its weird how it feels he stopped using magic for anything when he was in alaska he uses a gun for hunting uses power tools for his hobby and takes care of his fortune with quill and parchment seems he has no use for his wand anymore.
GreedElff chapter 10 . 7/12
Great story and ending! Thanks for sharing with all of us.
adafrog chapter 10 . 6/24
Great story, thanks.
Guest chapter 10 . 6/10
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From the author's bio.

"On August 26th, 2022, monbade passed away. I am his neice, and knowing how much his writing meant to him I am going to leave his stories up for people to read, but please understand that while reviews are always appreciated, there will be no responses.

Thank you to everyone who has ever read and reviewed, I know my uncle made many friends through his writing.

Due to this being the possible only time I will have access to his account as his laptop isn't in the best condition, this will be the only update I will put on his account."

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