Please make more chapters

I didnt realise how old this story was until I seen “Qrow’s semblance” in conjunction with him turning into a crow instead of Bad Luck? Or is this an oversight?

Im enjoying it so far, albeit with quite a few grammatical errors and sentence structure problems. Though theres some thing thats bugging me like timeline wise. How long has Jaune been in Vale exactly? It just feels weird for people to let him in and call him aunt and uncle for such a short period of time, due to the csnon timeline. Unless youre truly just stretching the timeline as far as you can to make it feasibly work.

Cause when it comes to it, at least using the MCU as an exsmple, we still know that its been 3 months Peter has been active.

And maybe this is just a minor thing, but would reslly help in putting the full scope unless you wrote it later abd im unaware. But still feel like that dhould be estsblished way sooner.

Also how did he get entolled in school? Hes 17 and im pretty eyre Aunt May isnt a legsl guardian. The school would have to have a parents sugnature and documents only they wiuld havd to get him in. Unless youre trying to say that Jaunes parents would just allow a complete stranger to have legal guardisnship over there only son… which is an extremely hard sell imo.

Agsin thiugh, i dont mind the story for what it is and will keep on reading, just wanted to let that off.

I miss both Monty and Stan. They were amazing dreamers.

Ok, this is a variation on this theme , and I have been hooked! First chapter has definitely caught my attention. Let's see where this goes!

Maria lost her eyes to Tock's sword as way to pay the price for ignore warning of her spider-sense, Blake Belladonna take up a persona of Wraith

I just reread all of The Amazing Jaune Arc and it was amazing, it felt like the first time I read it, nothing more to say, hope you are well and can write a new chapter soon.

Fox Alistair as the daredevil

Gwen Stacy has blond hair and blue eyes not brown hair and amethyst eyes

sofia is yang's cousin

Jaune is doing push ups with two train carts on his shoulders

Alexander O'hirn the rhino is Jaune's next SuperVillain

did Jaune just vomiting into nevermore's gullet

Whitley Schnee replace Tony Stark as iron man

Jaune arc meets Deadpool