Reviews for The Amazing Jaune Arc |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great Chapter Spidey always holds back is that the same for Jaune? Basically spidey always thinks he is weaker than he is |
![]() ![]() ![]() You should totally make a scenario for the next chapter where Jaune's costume is torn in a place where a recognizable part of him is revealed, giving Ruby a chance to figure out who's behind the mask. And in turn, Jaune will have to reveal to her that he's Spider-Man. Will Ruby feel betrayed or will she keep her hopes and keep crushing on him? If Ruby does find out, maybe she could go with Jaune to meet Maria Calavera a.k.a Madam Web to learn how to use her silver eyes like in canon. And possibly train along side him. Will Ruby ever get spider powers? Will she get something like a symbiote? Or will she be the next Madam Web? Just suggestions. But all in all, great story. I look forward to the next chapter. Whenever it comes out. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() ...Bang, Bang, pull my my Devil Trigger |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent work and glad the date went well |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was staring to be good the kiss was making me impatient to see but you mad genius has made scream "WHY" I love this chapter and also hate it because of the freaking cliffhanger but gotta have to be patient for the next chapter and I super hope that you made the upside-down spider-man kiss the temptation is making waiting to see it. Also I got a question are you gonna do a spider-man no more in a futur volume before volume 5 because you just finished volume 4 arc just want to know if you ever gonna make jaune lose is power well have the spider-man no more saga but can wait to see the next chapter very soon and hope that you don't sweat to much in you job hope see you next time in your next chapter and very hope to see the upside-down kiss either by ruby to black cat. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Quite good on how this was done here. Keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man i loving this story more and more and i cant wait to see on what will happen as how theyll stop the shadow war taht has been going on in this years. One things for sure is that Deadpool is keeping the place safe for now so no worries. Also when will the Invincible Whitley Scheme story be out and have you have any thoughts on Jaune Ben 10 story or jaune Superman But mostly ben 10 and keep up the work and will Jaune be giing into the spiderverse where miles is and will you help peni parker as her cannon is in need of change. But also will there be Venom |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome work |
![]() ![]() ![]() Will Jaune ever tell Ruby he's Spider-Man? She would fall even more head over heels for him if he did. Will Whitley ever tell Weiss he's Ironman? That will definitely shake her to the core. What kind of relationship do Wakanda and Menagerie have? Will team NPR become relevant again? Will Nora get her pancakes? All in all, great work. Looking forward to the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Meh, Blake is better even with her serious flaws than a girl with the maturity of a five-year-old. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I forgot if you said there would be a Spider-verse arc or not. I'm hoping so, but if there's not, it's fine. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jaune got bamboozled hoodwinked he got boondoggles flimflammed but it worked out for the better also I can half expect over protective yang if she hears about this. |
![]() ![]() Ignore the haters. They are just jealous they can't write a story capable of having 1000s favs and follows. |