Reviews for To Move Beyond |
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frankieu chapter 2 . 12/23/2017 nice chapter thx for writing it yay for settling in the rolle of quenie and sneaky hobbits :D |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/11/2017 Looking forward to the next chapter |
blackheart121992 chapter 1 . 12/9/2017 Love this so much and the last part with Dobby asking what to call the law about Kreacher funny as crap it was. As for a pairing idea I was thinking Glorfindel hear me out on this. He is longer living, and Lyra is now immortal, if they were to get married lyra’s magic could bind them together. Not just that but Glorfindel is a warrior and would understand her and could have her back . I have more ideas that could help with this but I don’t want to go to overboard and make this sound like a demand that would just be rude to the extreme. If you want me to brain storm with you more just pm me also I noticed a typo towards the beginning of your story you put Hattie in a paragraph where it talks about how Dobby and Kreacher survived. |
AshesGleamandGlow chapter 1 . 11/25/2017 This... Is freaking AMAZING! I CANNOT WAIT FOR AN UPDATE! THANK YOU FOR BESTOWING THIS WONDERFUL GIFT UPON US! The Younger Half of AshesGleamandGlow |
Nameless Angel 00 chapter 1 . 11/22/2017 I love how you portray Dobby and Kreacher. |
Jazz chapter 1 . 11/20/2017 Lyla and Boern the skin-changer, Lyla and Bard the guy with three kids from Lake Town Lyla and Haldir the Elf lieutenant of the elves of Lothlorien Lyla and Legolas Greenleaf of Mirkwood Or Lyla and Estel aka Aragorn aka Strider future king of Gondor? Anyone she picks will share her life span and since she cant due at all ( not even due to illness nor by blade) then if she got with someone of the Race of Man they would live long and look as they did when they married Lyla, or even an elf (who while immortal could still die of illness or by blade ) who would be able to live a long life with her regardless. I am so happy that she's ruler of all hobbits but still had her freedom because i don't want her to be forced to stay in the Shire. She will be needed to help during the coming journey. Maybe she can shrink Smaug the dragon down until he's the size of a large Eagle of Middle Earth and give him a de-aging potion so that Lyla can raise him as hers. I'm also happy that Dobby and Kreacher were able to be with her. I missed them in the beginning of the story. I hope she begins taking more care if her appearance as well. Being their Queen in a essence she will need to look the part. Maybe a permanent potion to mak her long black hair fall in perfect curls down her back. Something to correct her eyesight if you still have her wearing glasses. Maybe those quick wit potions to help her learn different languages in Middle Earth. Maybe have her meet Gandolf the Grey early on and learn different kinds of magic. She will need nice expensive looks robes, animal furs, maybe more weapons that are easier to conceal. She could wear her cloak of invisibility around her neck like a winter cloak with her hunting/dragon hide uniform for whenever she goes scouting or goes on journeys. Also since Neville gave her magical plants and flowers and seeds she should start a mini garden in a transportable greenhouse of sorts. That way she has access to food and or potion ingredients while on the go.? Sorry didn't mean to throw my ideas at you. Got carried away in all the excitement. But i am happy that Dobby, Kreacher, and Bilbo have become her new family. They are like her overprotective, older, ( though shorter) brothers. |
Pygmy Hippo chapter 1 . 11/18/2017 Very cute! |
goblin81 chapter 1 . 11/17/2017 Delightful story. |
Estriella chapter 1 . 11/17/2017 I love crossovers HP and LoR. There are so few of them! I love Fem!Harry and Harry!MOD too, so it's like my favorite mint ice cream with whipped cream and chocolate syrup. Do you know what else I'm missing for full happiness? Legolas! I love Legolas. Do you have the idea of pairing Harry with an elf? She will live long and the elves will also live long. Legolas is wonderful, so I do not lose hope! |
animeromance1972 chapter 1 . 11/16/2017 Well if she's Queen oops I mean 'Queenie' of the hobbits, who would be the lucky guy to be king? King Thranduil is always my first choice. |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/12/2017 I think Legolas/Lyra would be better than a Thranduil pairing - he's too tightassed and Malfoy like. I'm hoping to see how she and her elves dominate the Shire. She needs to build a home-base for herself and ward the entire area (now that she has the time). |
ReallyBored2 chapter 1 . 11/11/2017 Elf/Witch/Wizard pairings people do, to the point of cliche-But, Hobbit/Witch pairings? Rare , rare, rare . . . Lovely work. Thanks for the story! :) |
theoriginalsrizzlesouat1D chapter 1 . 11/11/2017 just found this, and I love it already! can't wait till the next chapter |
Mentari Jingga chapter 1 . 11/11/2017 I'm so glad reading a realistic fem!Harry response to after war party. How could one like a public party to honour oneself when one's whole life always tried to blend into background because of the blasted relatives called Dursley?! I've always imagined Harry feeling sad, despair, and angry over the souls who are lost in war. The monikers, Girl-Who-Lived and Woman-Who-Won, are ridiculous. Sorry I'm rambling. By the by, it's funny how house elves become friends with hobbits because of the hobbits having seven meals a day, LOL! Looking forward for the next chapter. P. S. Thank you for making Fred, George, Luna, and Neville survive war and giving them love from meeting their spouses. |
Lifeasweknowit14 chapter 1 . 11/10/2017 So good! I actually yelled when coming to the end of the chapter disappointed that it had ended. |