Reviews for Harry Potter and the Serpent Conquest |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Re-read the first story and first 12 chapters of the story, for some reason I did not receive the auto alert that you had published chapter 13 so this was a shock to me; albeit a very pleasant shock. Fabulous chapter; cliff hanger! Please sir may we have some more? Both chapters fabulously written; great story line and I have loved what you have done so far; would love to see where you go from here and what you have planned to finish the series. Thank you for sharing your story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Finally we see somebody not from the Potter/Peverall/Black lines use the mysterious Familial Magics! A great fight scene, a Hermione intervention, and a cliff hanger. What more could I hope for? I would have liked to see some more interaction between Harry and Gabrielle, maybe a dance or something? But alas. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wonder if Harry is going to tell Hermione and Ron about his time in Nurmengard and also when Ron finds out that his dad is sick. A great call before the storm chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Keep up the awesome work on this story. I binged the first two in this series, and very very much enjoyed them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Have read all of this story and I think you have done a fantastic job of it,and as I have read this in one go over about four days or so I am sad to now have to await your next post. I was very saddened when you killed Sirius, but understand the need for your story, he is one of my favorite characters and I wasn't happy with JKR when she had him die. A person who has so much bad happen to them does need some help and support, as you have portrayed Sirius in your story, he was doing a lot of good things, that really needed done ah well. Your writings are great and I will try to be patient while you write. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Think all your writing is amazing, please don’t stop! I’ve practically binge-read them all! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m hanging in there with you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() the story is great,when I saw an update I started to reread the entire story,I love it,I am just still really sad Sirius died,I really don t fell that harry can have a really happy ending without a parent figure and Sirius was the perfect oportunity,in the original story and in fanfiction,but that is just my chapter can t wait for more |
![]() ![]() Hi! I was so happy to see that there were updates! I have your storied saved as a bookmark and I opened it to find 3 new chapters. I really liked them and can't wait to see what Harry does now that he's discovered the Peverell ring. I also like that it's the Peverell and not the Gaunt like in the book. It adds and extra layer to it. Can't wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() please say you're still writing, ive devoured all 3 of these stories so far and am really wanting to know what happens next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for writing! You are incredible, this fictional has made me laugh and cry and it's just beautiful! It killed me when Srius died and I cant wait to see what you'll do next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your story is phenomenal. I just caught up and am pretty bummed that I won't be able to blaze through chapters to find out what happens next! I hope you keep being inspired and give us the next chapters soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hope you finish this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why would they let her do that to Charlie? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a great story |