Reviews for Harry Potter and the Serpent Conquest
dalynch81 chapter 13 . 2/7/2020
Re-read the first story and first 12 chapters of the story, for some reason I did not receive the auto alert that you had published chapter 13 so this was a shock to me; albeit a very pleasant shock. Fabulous chapter; cliff hanger! Please sir may we have some more?

Both chapters fabulously written; great story line and I have loved what you have done so far; would love to see where you go from here and what you have planned to finish the series.

Thank you for sharing your story.
Lord ITWarrior chapter 3 . 2/7/2020
Finally we see somebody not from the Potter/Peverall/Black lines use the mysterious Familial Magics! A great fight scene, a Hermione intervention, and a cliff hanger. What more could I hope for? I would have liked to see some more interaction between Harry and Gabrielle, maybe a dance or something? But alas.
Lord ITWarrior chapter 2 . 2/7/2020
I wonder if Harry is going to tell Hermione and Ron about his time in Nurmengard and also when Ron finds out that his dad is sick. A great call before the storm chapter!
griffoenix87 chapter 13 . 2/3/2020
Keep up the awesome work on this story. I binged the first two in this series, and very very much enjoyed them.
crafter43 chapter 13 . 2/1/2020
Have read all of this story and I think you have done a fantastic job of it,and as I have read this in one go over about four days or so I am sad to now have to await your next post.

I was very saddened when you killed Sirius, but understand the need for your story, he is one of my favorite characters and I wasn't happy with JKR when she had him die. A person who has so much bad happen to them does need some help and support, as you have portrayed Sirius in your story, he was doing a lot of good things, that really needed done ah well.

Your writings are great and I will try to be patient while you write.
Squire234 chapter 13 . 1/29/2020
Think all your writing is amazing, please don’t stop! I’ve practically binge-read them all!
Ducky1776 chapter 13 . 1/27/2020
I’m hanging in there with you!
Nicolle Cullen Masen chapter 13 . 1/25/2020
the story is great,when I saw an update I started to reread the entire story,I love it,I am just still really sad Sirius died,I really don t fell that harry can have a really happy ending without a parent figure and Sirius was the perfect oportunity,in the original story and in fanfiction,but that is just my chapter can t wait for more
Guest chapter 13 . 1/19/2020
Hi! I was so happy to see that there were updates! I have your storied saved as a bookmark and I opened it to find 3 new chapters. I really liked them and can't wait to see what Harry does now that he's discovered the Peverell ring. I also like that it's the Peverell and not the Gaunt like in the book. It adds and extra layer to it. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Keira1988hotmail.com chapter 13 . 1/18/2020
please say you're still writing, ive devoured all 3 of these stories so far and am really wanting to know what happens next!
BookandAnimeNerd chapter 13 . 1/13/2020
Thanks for writing! You are incredible, this fictional has made me laugh and cry and it's just beautiful! It killed me when Srius died and I cant wait to see what you'll do next!
je t'amour chapter 13 . 1/12/2020
Your story is phenomenal. I just caught up and am pretty bummed that I won't be able to blaze through chapters to find out what happens next! I hope you keep being inspired and give us the next chapters soon!
sylvelle chapter 13 . 1/8/2020
Hope you finish this.
sylvelle chapter 3 . 1/7/2020
Why would they let her do that to Charlie?
gefan1 chapter 13 . 1/4/2020
This is a great story
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