Reviews for Harry Potter and the Serpent Conquest |
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![]() ![]() The suspense is really good, such a big cliffhanger :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter. Hopefully Hermione will stop Harry from doing anything stupid with the ring. Keep up the good work! ~Estel |
![]() ![]() Great chapter. I love this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent chapter and a very good to see some more the best! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Always glad to see a new update. I must say that this third instalment of the series is less captivating than the previous two. To be honest a lot of the character development of last year seems to be lost this year which takes a way from your otherwise great storytelling. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! Please don't stop such GREAT writing! What happened to Harry with the ring? What happened with Ron? Did he escape? Was he rescued? Please! I ha e to know! Faithful Readers Await! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A great chapter I can't wait for another fight scene with Harry keep up the great work |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm enjoying the story. just not the sometimes several month long gap between chapters |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love that Ron smartened up about his lack of enthusiasm when it comes to learning stuff and figured out that his shortcomings are only his mistakes. You're doing a great work Jayanphoenix. I love this series and everytime we get an update, I can't help but smile. Thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice so they finally find ring horocrux. Was it at same place as canon didn't think so? Nice touch of magic protecting it. And Ron is caught up by snatchers and is now unconscious wonder where will that go. Hope you update soon. I would like to see other POVs too like Voldys Hogwarts students like what's happening our there Hopefully next update is sooner Thanks for chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() As usual I’m loving it. Please continue to write and hopefully finish up this epic series |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this chapter I am really interested in what the ring of Peverell will do for Harry I also am really interested in Ron’s story line |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY an update! so much to unpack in this chapter! first of all, i see that naughty cliffhanger you left for us! but i am so intrigued! the door snake is just full-on creepy. Poor Ron i feel so bad for him, yet kinda glad he is realizing his own shortcomings and that they are due to his own mistakes. |