| Reviews for Harry Potter and the Serpent Conquest |
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   DarkRavie chapter 5 . 7/7/2018 I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter. So they just might be able to recruit allies inside to help them. |
| cornholio4 chapter 5 . 7/7/2018 Hope umrbidge goes back to azkaban at the end of this |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/27/2018 Assuming we've seen the last of the story now . Shame , it only lasted this far |
| Rasket Mungrazi chapter 1 . 6/8/2018 Goddamnit update it man |
| mumphie chapter 4 . 5/28/2018 Please continue with this! Your character development is quite good. I have enjoyed this, even though your killing of the Dogfather made me tear up! : wand was free from his hand, not feel You're the boss now, not in the boss My thought was that we would be safer in an open Muggle area than in, not that in could not count on the Goblin's discretion, not count of...and Goblin's not Goblins make him forget his lost time, not made your - you're plural nouns that need a 's |
| mumphie chapter 3 . 5/28/2018 Love it - Just some grammar/typo issues; bathe - bathe of - off complete-completely could have, not cold have extra unneeded words - allure made emphasized |
| mumphie chapter 2 . 5/28/2018 Keep this one going! :) spelt perhaps was supposed to be smelt? "She had a trail that matched her dress." What is that? marque should be marquee Also: here - hear passed- past loose - lose their selves - themselves |
| mumphie chapter 1 . 5/27/2018 Instead of assassinated, did you mean associated? |
| FaerieFlightz chapter 4 . 5/22/2018 I love this story! |
| Omkar chapter 4 . 5/12/2018 Please Update soon |
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/10/2018 pleassseee update! So impatient for next chapter |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/30/2018 This is a really good story with great quality writing! Read all three books in the span of a week, they are so addictive. Literally cried at Sirius' death! However some of the content was inconsiderate towards vegetarians. I really enjoy this story and don't want to stop reading it, however that aspect of it ruined it for me, so please don't write that kind of cntent in the future. Anyhow, keep up the good work & looking forward to the next chapter! |
| MervyMerv chapter 4 . 4/28/2018 ah mate just read all 3 books in a week so dope need this updated more regularly |
| Guest chapter 4 . 4/21/2018 Please update soon! |
| chellij chapter 1 . 4/12/2018 I really hope you continue this! Probably the favourite of all I've found so far! x |