Reviews for Harry Potter and the Serpent Conquest |
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![]() ![]() ![]() very excited to see more about whats going on with the Peverell lineage and all of the history that you bring to it all. keep going because its been worth the read so far. |
![]() ![]() Two days haven't passed yet , have they ? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've loved this series for so long and re read multiple times but I CANNOT BELIEVE YOU KILLED SIRIUS! I genuinely cried loads! Amazing story, so well written and the plot is my fave. Just a couple of issues with spelling, missing words etc but nothing awful. Again, love it love it love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Always nice to see an update. After reading the first two chapters i begin to wonder what the direction of this story is going to be? You have changed a lot from canon but now you seem to return to the canon storyline. To me this seems inconsistent with the progress harrison made. The whole camping plan was classic old trio badly tought trough! There is no reason at all for them to do that after the progress you put them trough. |
![]() ![]() ![]() just read this whole trilogy in 3 days, obsessed such amazing writing and story, cant wait for future chapters |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I started back in book one just over a year ago. 12 years of reading FF and this is by far the best! looknforward to more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another fantastic chapter, keep up the good work, I love what you have done with this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awaiting more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such an amazing chapter! I hope mr Weasley will be able to die in battle rather than from only his condition |
![]() ![]() ![]() As for Mr. Weasley would the addition of Phoenix tears at least keep his condition stable. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter. Keep up the good work! ~Estel |
![]() ![]() ![]() Storyline and plotting are quite up to par. Spelling and grammar, not so much. Please get a competent beta reader, this was quite annoying to read in some places. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What about Harry recommending Phoenix Tears? If it works for a Basilisk... |