Reviews for Harry Potter and the Serpent Conquest
ElizabethAnneSoph chapter 1 . 11/12/2017
Omg! I still can’t get over that Sirius is dead! is he truly gone for good? Since the headship ring hasn’t passed directly to Harry I am wondering... and the ward stone at Black Manor was fighting him ... maybe a chance that Sirius isn’t dead?
but I’m so glad that Harry is protecting his legacy and homes with that Egyptian lock down! I do wonder what will happen next! Poor Hermione that she had to send her parents away! And Harry has lost the only family he ever had!
teachergirl chapter 1 . 11/10/2017
I'm so glad you started the next installment. I've been enjoying this series very much.
mwinter1 chapter 1 . 11/9/2017
Oh I hope you have Harry take the war to the death eaters and pure bloods that support Tom. Awaiting more
Noble Korhedron chapter 1 . 11/9/2017
ULP! Showtime, methinks...
Bluewolf80 chapter 1 . 11/8/2017
Great first chapter! I’m still holding onto the hope that Sirius is faking his death. Please?
draconic skysong chapter 1 . 11/8/2017
Wooh! that's an amazing start! I can't wait to see how things play out. You use kannon information, but you spin it differently, so I can't wait to see how it ends!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/8/2017
A good do not make this follow canon too much,make it a little au. Divergence always beautifies the story.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/7/2017
Wonderful start to a new chapter of your story I can’t wait for more
jadely31 chapter 1 . 11/7/2017
Great beginning to a new adventure. I hope Harry and Hermione have stashed all the things they didn't have when they left the wedding in the original story. Especially food. I look forward to where you take this story
Guest chapter 1 . 11/7/2017
That was a very brilliant chapter! Still sad about Sirius, but I assume you have something up your sleeve? The Seal of Amun was a neat idea and to have Harry cast it on numerous properties was impressive. No offense, but please don't make Hermione super smart. I love your version of Harry and I want to see him shine. This Harry is a leader and is very mature as a person and a wizard. He doesn't need someone his age treating him like she's his mom and bossing him around. It's annoying and can sometimes be a hindrance. As filthy and disgusting as Voldemort is, he has the audacity to be arrogant? Please let one of the Death Eaters, preferably Rabastan, see through all his lies. They're bowing to a disgusting wizard who wouldn't be what he is without them. Someone has to realize that.
Charles Ceaser chapter 1 . 11/7/2017
Awesome chapter. Please update soon.
sal1066 chapter 1 . 11/7/2017
Interesting start. I look forward to seeing more at your convenience, thank you for sharing.
KnowPein chapter 1 . 11/6/2017
I feel like you are moving to canon
You had diverged beautifully now you are converging to canon.
Will it be same as canon
delia cerrano chapter 1 . 11/6/2017
Here we go! But what's with the Black family ring? I still forlornly wish it not going to Harry right away might...just might... mean that Sirius is still some how alive.
MarilynT chapter 1 . 11/6/2017
Well - I know you had to kill Sirius to progress the story - but I hate that. Great update by the way! Looking forward to where you are taking the story!.
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