|Reviews for Time Lapse by purpleC305 & NewTwilightFan|
| mo kagen chapter 1 . 6/14/2018
| ruinedbyrob chapter 1 . 1/9/2018
LOVED this! The Swans were laugh out loud hilarious and Edward was the sweetest...*sigh*
I'm so glad Bella woke up before he had a chance to slink away. The story didn't need the drama of her having to chase after him. It was perfect.
| FrustratedLawStudent chapter 1 . 1/4/2018
I know it's supposed to only be a sample but it should have been an actual real entry! Absolutely brilliant, and christmasy, and perfect! I'd love to know what the author has in store for them :) thank you for sharing!
| roxiegirl chapter 1 . 12/31/2017
This was a FANTASTIC story. I loved every minute. Laughter and tears and huge smiles. The perfect story! Thank you!
| peacelovebre chapter 1 . 12/20/2017
I think I’ve found my favorite
| daiseys chapter 1 . 12/14/2017
Would love more of this story
| twiclare chapter 1 . 12/13/2017
Loved this one! Bella's crazy family were a hoot. I'd love to read more of their life together.
| BeautifulRainne chapter 1 . 12/13/2017
What a wonderful story! I loved the quality of the writing. I especially loved how you were able to describe the emotions of each scene that Edward captured and gave for Christmas pictures. This story made me want to be a part of this family and bounce down the stairs with them on Christmas morning. Wonderful story and thoroughly enjoyed myself while reading it. Too bad we can’t vote for this one. Excellent entry!
| tff000 chapter 1 . 12/13/2017
fun story. wish there was more
| 2caughtup chapter 1 . 12/10/2017
That was really cute!
| 2old4fanfic chapter 1 . 12/10/2017
| Nannyjojo chapter 1 . 12/10/2017
That made me cry but I loved it.
| keshaluvsRob chapter 1 . 12/9/2017
Wonderful sample entry. Loved the story!
| starsmina chapter 1 . 12/8/2017
| Leigh Caulder chapter 1 . 12/7/2017
If this were on the poll, it would hands down be my top pick. This was my favorite story of the bunch. I read 23 of the 26 submissions.