Reviews for The Outsider
Howbrighthesky chapter 1 . 11/21
This is an excellent story! Angsty but really focusing on how warm and kind Milo appears to the atlantians, and Kira in particular. Personally you took the words right out of my mouth with this, Patch is animated beautifully and he is a really warm person.
StarrySapphire77 chapter 1 . 3/6/2018
My poor baby! Milo is like Reid from Criminal Minds! I just realized it in this story! Just more of a reason to love the precious little genius!
Griffin Stone chapter 1 . 12/26/2017
Wow, love it! Are you going to continue?
Aw, poor Milo (though I will admit these injuries ARE more realistic for that kind of fall). Gotta love those Atlantian crystals!
I liked the way Kida calls Milo "Little One." It really does suit him, and her description of him was good! Plus, the way Kida thinks Milo is blind is a good point. I think her reactions to Milo are cute.