Reviews for The Price of Loyalty |
---|
![]() ![]() ![]() Yessssss! |
![]() ![]() Oh my god oh my god this fic was so wholesome The whole plot was gold, also the perspective change what with Merlin, Gwen and Arthur, and the Morgana subplot and everyone realising she has magic. Uther was such a dick, authentic lol, and I love your Merlin and Arthur characterisation omg :) the ending KILLED me i'm crying this is one of these sentences that just stick with you I am absolutely in LOVE with your writing style and can't wait to discover more stories by you much love 333 |
![]() ![]() omg omg that's such a good idea though! And the writing is really good too :) can't wait to read the next chapters! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Idk if I’ve reviewed this story before, but I was just reading it again over on AO3 and wanted to leave a review there but it kept giving an error message, so I’m just gonna review here :D So in case this exact same review shows up twice on AO3, that’s why :P I think this is the third time I’ve read this story :D It’s really good. Excellent characterizations, and the overall tone fits so well with the show’s that I can see it as an actual episode. Well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was the most graceful way I have seen a magic reveal handled. I loved the concept and the execution! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was brilliant. Wrenched and then warmed my heart in the best possible way. Thank you for making a rough time better through your story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very sweet |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic set-up and drama with an excellent reveal. Definitely a very nice read. Thank you for writing and posting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww, this was so perfect! Like an episode right out of the series but better cause Arthur actually accepted Merlin (without dying), and the fluffy at the end was so sweet. I loved how Arthur finds out Merlin has magic and then just decides there is no way he will let Merlin die |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just reread for about the second time and it’s as enjoyable and well-written as ever. The progression is very well done and the reactions of the characters seem quite realistic—I really like how you did it and I bet this’ll be in my “reread” pile for a while yet. Thanks for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was awesome and I'll choose to forget the canon ending now and just remember this as how Arthur finds out about Merlin's magic |
![]() ![]() Thanks soooo much! This has been the perfect story, super balanced and a great ending. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely positively love this story, I don't know what I could say that would do it justice. Except I am adding it to my favorites. |
![]() ![]() ![]() :D yes yes yes YES i loved every part of this |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm absolutely in love with this. |