Reviews for The Price of Loyalty |
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![]() ![]() Such an awesome story, I really love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That is real friendship. I like the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Morgana now, as well. I like how Gwen supports her even knowing about her magic. And I didn't even think of Kilgharrah, but worse, now everyone will eventually die. Very interesting and great chapter. Real life and late night are doing me in...more tomorrow I hope. |
![]() ![]() ![]() And they saved Merlin! Good for Lludd, very brave of him. Poor Merlin, not accustomed to receiving gratiude for the things he did. That's really sad. So glad they took the risk to save him. Aw, another great speech from Merlin and Arthur actually agreed this time! They are meant to have a destiny together! Poor Merlin and his throbbing head. Another great chapter to a great story. I did binge read last night but, real life again, I'll review more tomorrow hopefully. Love this, hope you write more stories. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Of course our kind Merlin would have such earnest sorrow for that group of terrified sorcerers, and so brave of him to stand up to Arthur about it. Loved that part, I think Arthur was a bit surprised by the passion Merlin showed for them. My heart broke for Merlin as he gathered the list of names, especially that little girl. So glad he decided to help them, but what a cliffhanger! Great chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Did you just discover Merlin or something? Bc I have always been a fan of your Supenatural works and follow you as an author for those... but I am a 1000x bigger fan of Merlin and the fact that you posted in that fandom makes me very very happy. Great work. Loved it all the way through :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice sweet story! Great job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story! Thank you for writing it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was amazing! I just read the entire thing in one evening, and didn't spot one mistake! The story arch was amazing, and I love how Merlin resolved it with a clever lie. Thanks so much for writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That ending, the feels! Loved this so much! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was amazing! |
![]() ![]() Loved this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a brilliant story. Just a little bit of everything. Action, angst, magic (of course) and humour. All in just the right portions too. Just loved it. A hard reveal for Merlin but so glad for Arthur to know and accept. Thanks. Will read again! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was sooooo good! I loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice way to end it Have you considered writing a story where only the wearable crystals exist? A bit more drawn out of the hiding and avoiding phase? |