Reviews for ANBU boot camp |
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![]() ![]() ![]() The marriage/mortality thing is just a way to shove your own views in and disregard basic human biology regarding fertility windows. But, other than that, it's a good chapter as most have been. |
![]() ![]() ![]() when next update? |
![]() ![]() ![]() feels bad that this story still needs updates if your still around and still want a beta i can help out |
![]() ![]() ![]() narutos sage coat is red with black flames |
![]() ![]() ![]() 4th or 5th reread. It’s that good. I can see the prank now. Naruto walks into a Hyuga’s home unannounced using Chief’s technique, and impersonates him with his voice, making the Hyuga panic. Hyuga turns around, and it’s just Naruto. |
![]() ![]() ![]() holy shit, glad you're ok |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story but way too much drama in it. The story pacing and flow is very slow. Only a few days has past, not even a week yet took over 7 chapters. Way too long for nothing to really happen. Good luck. |
![]() ![]() ![]() really hope this story gets updated someday i love what you did with the cast |
![]() ![]() ![]() i have read this fanfic four time and it took me till the fifth to catch that james bond reference last chapter |
![]() ![]() Well I really hope you are doing better. Great story & writing do far. Only a few things I wasn't a fan of but everyone has there own likes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Naruto's fear of math is hilarious |
![]() ![]() ![]() Comida, comida, comida. Buen provecho. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Alimenta al monstruo jajaja |
![]() ![]() ![]() Me encanta tu historia está muy bien realizada. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Me encanta actualmente me encuentro recibiendo una formación militar y tienes razón |