It’s really nice to see Katsuki actually be a decent (for him) person once in a while, not including stories that have him mellow out from the start. Nice! Oh, and the ending was cute.

A battle that will change everything...that we will never see. I’m joking, of course, this chapter kicked ass.

Not a lot to comment on here, although you’ve definitely done a good job with writing the bad guys.

Hey, action is action, and I’m a sucker for good fight scenes. Besides, that ending is one hell of a cliffhanger.

Izuku punching Katsuki in the face is the highlight of the story, hands down. And while the drama of Izuku copping a feel seems a little forced, although then again it is Izuku, it is a decent excuse to have the two separated when the villains strike.

Here’s something I like: Eraserhead being nice. Or at least, whatever qualifies as “nice” for Shota Aizawa.

I liked the scene with Ochako, and how both Izuku and Mina just realized that their partner is attractive. And Katsuki is...Katsuki.

Character development at its finest in this chapter, with Mina having overcome the problem that she and Denki had in the final exam: they had the power to beat Nezu, but they panicked. But now she knows how to keep calm in the face of adversity. Awesome.

Poor Izuku. Also, I liked the scene with All Might, even if it’s been established that Mina is perfectly capable of defending herself (her encounter with Tomura, anybody?).

I love Mina’s family in this story! OCs are a crapshoot, but it seemed like you did a great job.

Not the biggest fan of the whole Ochako jealousy thing, but it’s whatever. I like Mina standing up to Katsuki, and the reactions to the new couple were perfect.

I see that Mina shares the fandom’s opinions on Inko. And I like how Mina learns to be aware of Izuku’s feelings, like he’s done with her. Hooray for character development!

I love the last scene with Izuku and Mina, and now I’ll be looking online to find out where to buy a Xenomorph plushie.

Cute. That’s all that I can say, cute.

Treating math problems as villains? That’s genius! Izuku should totally be a teacher at U.A. when he goes pro!