I have a question, why would sage use or give spear to someone who proved themselves, seeing how sage desire was peace, bot destruction, the second she used power and tried to kill him, should have been second she lost.

Yet at same time she showed her desire to survive, but that still doesn't show why sage would give her anything at all.

okay, I'm dropping this, it devolved into some kind of boring slice of life, the gaming system is barely mentioned and the text quality itself is barely tolerable in the first place. don't waste your time

This is a great story! A very fun read. Thank you for writing this.

Good story, was hoping the epilogue would have the stats she had after she passed away decades later. Was interested to see what they were

I like how all of team 7 is a lot stronger in this. Naruto and Sasuke were trained since they were little, and Sakura is learning a lot from Yuriko too. But I especially like that Kakashi is actually as strong as people say he is in this. Reason being he's fresh out of Anbu instead of wasting his skills away for years before canon

I'm guessing if Iwa ends up allying with Konoha then Onoki will be at the chunin exams in like 8 years. Probably might end up saving hiruzen too

Should've picked the natural sage perk. Crazy to go kenjutsu medic instead of being able to basically use a lesser sage mode from the get go, as an Uchiha no less. Seriously nature chakra is op and its weird not to pick it

so, is it kisame a missing nin or not?

I love to re-read this story from time to time and it never fails to make me smile and tear up.

10/10, will re-read again.

I am blown away by this story. Your character Yoriko was amazingly well written. You made her progress steady and believable, without focusing solely on the mechanics. You gave her a personality that was tough but kind. Kudos, so very well done. Keep up the amazing work, I look forward towards your next work.
Regards , KanaRadiance

Amazing story!

Thay was fantastic. No rewrite necessary

her stats finally changed jeez

Wow... That are the only words that come to my mind after finishing this story. It was a very good ride for me, not to mention that it is one of the few fics i ever read that are finished.

It is a solid 4.5/5 stars in my opinion, but i have high hopes of it reaching 5 stars. there are a lot of minor things that bugged me but the most important thing that i noticed was the pacing.
It felt rushed after the kyuubi attack and even more so the ending. A big up would be to do more of slice of life to compliment the charcters and especially Madoka-chan and Yurikos family life.
As a minor detail that i noticed is the inconsistancy of Madokas development because i dont think that a 4 year old is still playing in a playpen. The second thing is that the age of Roshi that u explained in a note doesnt match up and Yurikus own age. That is all and keep up your good work!

Yours Truly, CeloW (formerly ClasherYYT)

This was a fantastic read