| Reviews for Ninja Gamer Complete |
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   SDeep2026 chapter 8 . 7/2 Damn.. this was quite emotional towards the end.. Pretty nice chapter, and the fight was excellently written. Good work! :D |
| SDeep2026 chapter 7 . 7/2 The fight scenes were excellently written! I loved them. :D Pretty nice chapter.. and the part about the Rabbit Beast was just hilarious.. |
| SDeep2026 chapter 6 . 7/2 Nice chapter.. I love the Original Characters you have introduced.. and the Original content like the different grades of Iro-nin, and the different television channels(pretty entertaining stuff).. :D |
| SDeep2026 chapter 5 . 7/2 Wow! Pretty nice stuff! Yuriko's pretty smart, and it is fascinating to read about a more humane Orochimaru.. Pretty sure Yuriko's gonna be much stronger after she recovers from her wounds and stuff.. Uchiha shinobi become stronger through battles for sure.. I shudder to think of the unholy combination of a Saiyan Uchiha - the Multiverse would never know Peace if that came to reality.. A single mistake, kindly correct it - Remembering Kakashi's trick.. to make see a small... - should be "to make her see...", I guess. |
| SDeep2026 chapter 4 . 7/2 Pretty nice chapter.. nice last second save by Sakaki-san. :) No guesses for Sakaki-san's Mangeyko Sharingan abilities from me.. "But even still, she didn't...when their hearts explode." - This paragraph is suddenly in the third person in a first person narrative.. kindly change it if needed.. |
| SDeep2026 chapter 3 . 7/2 Pretty nice chapter.. the fight scenes were pretty well written. :D |
| SDeep2026 chapter 2 . 7/2 Pretty nice chapter... but the Academy and Graduation part feels a bit rushed. Otherwise, pretty nice chapter.. I wonder how will the MC react with killing.. and if her profession in the previous world would have any effect on her views of shinobi, and killing. I found two mistakes, please correct them when you are able - 1. "How about I show you some cool ken juts up tricks tomorrow..." - should be 'kenjutsu', I guess. 2. "Nothing on my end," she reported, her voice even less than a whisper as I spoke... - 'she' and 'her' should be in first person i.e. 'I' and 'my'. |
| SDeep2026 chapter 1 . 7/2 Pretty nice, especially for this being the first chapter.. the tone of this chapter has been quite interesting, and I'm pretty eager to see how the MC is going to act after her(his) reincarnation actually sinks into her(his) mind.. :) |
| ultraghoul2134 chapter 43 . 7/1 One of my favourite pieces of fanfiction of all time, I loved the usage of the GAMER system and how it wasn't completely always there in the readers face, compared to other gamer fics I have read. As a side note I don't normally read fictions/fanfictions with female characters (I can't usually relate to them on a physically level) but this was written really well and was very enjoyable 10/10 Thank you for writing the story of Yuriko Uchiha. |
| lunadream13 chapter 43 . 6/27 great story. i enjoyed it reading it. |
| SMB chapter 2 . 6/23 Why is she still verbally asking for things and giving herself away while ignoring using her mental voice for commands? What a f**king moRon. |
| SMB chapter 1 . 6/23 F**k you! She GOT 4 bullseyes! She earned those bonuses you f**k! Bump the bitch up to the next level! I think I read this a while ago so if this is a repeat comment f**king leave it because you didn't fix your f**king mistake! |
| Luxo11 chapter 14 . 6/21 I remeber why I drop it at this chapter every time i pick up this fanfic |
| wtfchrlz chapter 4 . 6/20 So her Sharingan does basically nothing in this since it apparently doesn't make her more skilled at fighting and she ends up learning techniques from the gamer system. |
| The Immortal Lake Man chapter 13 . 6/20 I'm...very concerned for Yuriko seeing that this is 1/4 of the story, how much more heartbreak will she endure? |