Reviews for A Brighter Sun
ThorinKiliandFili4ever chapter 1 . 3/19/2012
A great story. Very well written.
Aria Breuer chapter 1 . 4/4/2011
This was a good story and soliloquy.

I noticed one typo you might consider fixing: "had" should actually be "hat" in the second paragraph.

I'm glad I came across this story. It was pretty accurate with what happened in the book, and possibly what Frodo's thoughts were on his journey.

Good work.

-Aria Breuer
rabidsamfan chapter 1 . 5/15/2004
I liked this. I'm glad I stumbled onto it. I particularly liked the line where Frodo is wondering if Merry and Pippin will cause trouble and Sam will blush when they get back.
Thank you!
Moriel chapter 1 . 3/19/2003
Good story idea! It would be better if you described each thing more, which would also help increase the dramatic effect and the angst. In the beginning, when Frodo is talking about Gandalf's visits it is a little unclear about when they happened. It seemed that Frodo was slightly out of character, except for his thoughfulness. Again, I like your story, and you're a good writer!