You accidently spelt Beowolves as Beowloves

Have I missed someone trying to unlock his aura? Or has no one try

Oman looking at the letters for this acronym the only option I can now think of is team PWRN...

Epic chapter keep it up!

I honestly am happy you didn't have percy join the white fang though the whole interaction was unnecessary and a waste of two chapters. I honestly can't see how this is all going to play out, as a reader the only thing I want is for Percy to reunite with his team and go back to Beacon. The problem I have with this fanfiction is the fact that you want to break away from canon to much. so you do some pretty forced shit to essentially strong arm the direction, and comes off as fairly dissatisfying and bland. The only reason I have for wanting Percy at the bar is to sleep with the twins but feels like something that can't be sustained. If Percy returns which I doubt he will even if it would have been better in the long run would feel hollow and invalidate the original choice. Honestly there isn't any real options for Percy unless you just have him meaninglessly explore the world.

It's the same fucking story. Seriously Percy having some psychotic episode because of some bullying was bad writing at it's finest and made zero sense for his character. Hell the fact that he just keeps punching was always stupid. And now your forcing Juane into the story when he has no place being in it anymore. Also if you have Percy join the whitefang again I'm dropping it immediately.

Percy should know by now that Aura and Semblances come from the soul not the body. Anyone of them should be able to awaken his Aura, and to be honest if you decided to do that it would just be a significant buff to his abilities and limits.

If you still go the route of kicking Percy out I will have to drop this, it didn't work the first time and won't work a second. Also I don't really care how you bring Juane back into the story, it won't make sense regardless and he will be useless unless it's just a minor delay because he will be entering the story with no aura or the pivotal training from Pyrrha.

This chapter just felt really weird in regards to Percy, especially after we see him not taking anybody’s crap in the rest of this story and holding such strong stances. All of which is in character and I felt was great. So I was thinking he’d go to Junior’s, maybe lay down the smack like Yang if need be, and go solve some of the issues he knows are out there. Certainly did not see him throwing away some principles and becoming a member of a criminal network and accessory to crimes. Not really any way back from that, at least there shouldn’t be. This just felt like a very weird choice and out of character from both a PJO and this story perspective.

thanks for the awesome story

I don't think he could talk to horse or fish grim if he could it would just be them saying hungry over and over would be kinda funny though

That's shit, how in the fuck is Percy not absolutely demolishing Pyrrha lmfao he fought fucking titans and giants. That's genuinely hilarious

Since this was six years ago, I can see areas in which you've improved and stayed the same. Pretty cool. That said, I think the you of now would have made a different choice regarding Percy accepting going to a school.

No jaune ? A rwby fic without its main character sounds crazy.

So did Percy misremember Frank leading the charge in the final battle alongside Percy and Jason or did you forget what you had written?