Reviews for Moonlight |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hmmm Percy x Weiss sounds interesting Great Chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh man, I didn't remember this story being so cringe. The entire situation of Percy leaving Beacon (and how people reacted) and even more egregious, the entire interaction with the twins, was so annoying and bothersome to read I ended up in a bad mood after finishing the chapter. At some times I just forced myself to keep going in the hopes the chapter gets better, but sadly nope. I don't know what happened to the quality of this chapter, but I remembered this story being so much better. What even happened? I guess that's it for me then. Good luck with the rest of the story, and thanks for the chapter, I guess. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah a bartender at Junior’s, seems like a great start for all the good RWBY fics |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent, honestly on a RWBY and One Piece kick lately so seeing this cross still update is a relief - Hoping for Per y to lure his team to his way of thinking, Ozpin is just being is usual self...and Goodwitch needs to get the stick out of her arse lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Now all we need is Lung vs. Percy for a remake of Kyushu! |
![]() ![]() ![]() of a lower quality than the other chapters, pretty boring too. A typo here. "And if he doesn't want to?" Pyrrha asked."He seemed pretty annoying by everything that went down." I think it should be annoyed instead of annoying |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice worm reference |
![]() ![]() ![]() “Lung” huh, and hes got a group called “Mistralian Bad Boyz” aka “MBB” does this mean theres a guy called “Kaiser” leading a mafia known as “Atlas Eighty Eight”, aka “A88” |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome work please continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() Percy involved with the White Fang will do nothing to impact as Adam still exists. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Adam is a scumbag he was responsible for cutting the arm of Yang and those brutal attacks towards innocents. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I still think what Percy did is cowardly he would never abandon his team you seem to forget about his fatal flaw. Personal loyalty this is more important to him than anything himself even his own life. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Phyrrha would be perfect for Percy not only is she attractive but very skilled. Phyrrha is a favorite character of mine that was sacrificed unjustly on the canon series. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm really enjoying this so far. I'm happy with how you decided to do the team assignments as well. Not too many people switch it up |