|Reviews for Divisions|
| ebfiddler chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
Wow, I liked this. The characterization of Kaylee felt just right, and I liked how you dealt with the issues faced by this quartet of characters.
| Ari chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
This was really good :)
| LaLa chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
I absolutely love this, you have no idea. Everyone was so perfectly in character. It was beautiful :D " She managed a turn that would have warmed a drill-instructor's heart and started to march back toward the ship." made me LAUGH! PLEASE WRITE MORE?
| Aries Zodiac chapter 1 . 12/19/2006
Nice story! Wonderful characterisations and I loved the ines around some things would never change- particularly about the 'doc and the merc' setting each other to hissing- sums them up perfectly!
Anyway, really liked it; hope to read more of your stuff!
| BadBoyLover chapter 1 . 12/13/2004
Oh that was cute!
But I was finally hoping for a Kaylee/Mal...
| B chapter 1 . 12/12/2004
Really nice - I liked both the story and the way you characterized everyone.
| Ken chapter 1 . 11/18/2004
I am new to reading Firefly fanfic, but just want to say that this is pretty great and it made me smile. The way you described the characters and their interaction really stands out to me. Thanks for a great read! :)
| Brynn McK chapter 1 . 9/27/2004
M. Simon/Kaylee, Mal/Inara, and Mal/Kaylee friendship. A few of my favorite things. Though I can't quite see that Mal would be so unguarded, even with Kaylee, to talk about his feelings for Inara, your version of how that conversation would go if it did happen was excellent. I also loved Inara's motivation for helping Simon, and the way she sees his situation; those two fascinate me, too, so alike and so different, and you did a wonderful job of furthering a friendship that's only barely hinted at on the show. Also excellent insight that Mal's affection for Kaylee might be a bit selfishly motivated and a bit too protective; I never looked at it that way before, but it makes a lot of sense. Great work, again.
| Majick chapter 1 . 9/26/2004
My first Firefly fanfic, and a good one to start with :-) You've captured the characters of the crew well here, even spicing things up with a little Chinese for good measure. I'm glad you didn't decide to go against the suggested couplings Joss &c developed in the show, mainly 'cos I think Kaylee and Simon are good for one another.
I look forward to reading more of your work :-)
| Nautica7mk chapter 1 . 9/20/2004
D mn! That was a good read.
| Elf Of Avalon chapter 1 . 2/1/2004
lovely. Very lovely. The best I've read tonight-and extremely long!
| ThatGirlIsabel chapter 1 . 7/12/2003
I read this one a month or two ago and I have no idea why I didn't leave a review, but I loved this fic, every single word. Your Mal and Kaylee are absolutely flawless in speech and action, completely believeable. This comes from a Mal/Kaylee sucker, so it was twice as shiny to read this fic.
To say exactly what I loved about this would probably take hours and be too much to fit in the little review window, but know that I adored the whole thing.
Although I was rooting for the mongrel. ;)
| RainTiger chapter 1 . 4/26/2003
Very shiny. I wanted Mal and Kaylee to end up together, though. They were all cute-like, and I'm more for unconditional ships than "Mal/Inara" and "Simon/Kaylee"... but that doesn't change that it was a very good written fic. Kudos.
| bushlaboo chapter 1 . 3/21/2003
I actually read this the other day but didn't have time to reply because I was on the road. This story was just amazing. I love seeing Mal and Kaylee together, and I thought it was how Inara pointed out that Kaylee could love someone else and still be loyal to Mal.
Now I adore Kaylee and Simon, they are so cute and awkward ... still there is something about Mal/Kaylee.
Anyway, wonderful story. I loved it. I'm off to read your newest one plus the one I somehow missed.
| Kaythryn chapter 1 . 3/19/2003
This is nice. Mal's character seemed a bit off to me, but everyone else was straight on. I love the story line too, very nicely done. As I was reading I thought Mal and Kaylee were going to hook up on numerous occasions- I’m happy the way it ended up, I’m a die hard Simon/Kaylee fan. Please, keep the stories rolling in.