Great work on this story I liked it.

This fan fiction is AWESOME!
Please write another chapter!

I loved this! This is really good! Love the names of the girls and I think is a nice touch that the youngest was named after Lucy. Keep the good work!

This is nice. It'll be interesting to see it from Peter's perspective. I like how protective and kind he is to Lucy.

this story is awesome. I have been following since the beginning. I'm pretty sure that Edmund, Susan and Lucy or at least Ed and Susan would had kids, maybe Ed finds someone and have at least one kid. And the war thing? It's awesome! You have a true follower here. Keep updating. It's awesome!

I'm sorry to throw cold water on your efforts, but these are middle class kids in 1940s Britain. They didn't go to co-educational schools. The sexes were strictly segregated. Remember in the beginning of Prince Caspian? The girls were set to catch one train to their school and the boys were catching another one in a different direction to their's. So Peter would definitely not have escorted Lucy to her classroom.

This is really good. I am enjoying reading this story. Keep going!