Reviews for A tad different (Discontinued) |
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![]() ![]() I'm loving this story so far my guy. I'm going to be honest with you though, imma need some more soon, otherwise I'll be reeeeaaalllllll bored. Keep up the good work. ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hate self inserts too king |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thought the meteor pieces were also destroyed |
![]() ![]() ![]() is this story ever gonna get continued, its been over 7 months |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pretty sweet cute chapter with Saitama and Tatsumaki. Although getting drunk first and then get more honest was a bit sad though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pretty good fighting scenes. I like how you made Saitama finish mister A class Rank 1 in a quick manner. I hope Saitama give him more beatings in the future until his face is darn ugly. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pretty good. Finally he helped out against the meteor from start to finish. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pretty good chapter. It is more entertaining to read about battle scene rather than skip it. Pretty fun change with the house of evolution part. I still think house of evolution is a boring section of the story-line in the manga/anime. You better get clearer with your dialogues about who says what, got very confusing in this chapter. For example doing it this way with future dialogues: (Tatsumaki) - Where did that baldy go? (Saitama) - Who are you calling baldy? You know my name. (Tatsumaki) - Baldy fits you better. (Genos) - (They are getting along as usual, quite the couple.) That's how Shakespeare did with dialogues in his written scripts that had to be spoken by different actors in his plays. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pretty good chapter, although a bit short. I cant say Tatsumaki is that out of character since her character is rather "unstable" in the original. Sure, can be foul mouthed, violent etc. But that can be due to her previous environment/education. Still, a person can change with time or use a different personality depending on the situation. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pretty fun chapter. I wonder if your fic will be like that in the long run. One will see. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hope you update soon but i’m Very confused on chapter 29 and 30 |
![]() ![]() Thanks for the story, by now I love it |
![]() ![]() This is a really good story and I wish there was more. |
![]() ![]() You know, I would love a chapter that Tatsumaki would say Daddy to Saitama lmfao. |