For any future reader's knowledge:
The asari mc is crippled in terms of biotics. Biotics are awesome, which is the main fucking reason I wanted to read an asari fic. It's not the only way they're crippled, so don't expect a competent mc.

One can hope for another chapter

More pls, also i hope she looted their weapons and anything else of worth while she was at it, she does have debts to worry about.

Hope you come back to this some day, its pretty good

It's amusing how Tela Vasir is the least shitty person in this. Even the MC, who refers to someone trying to escape literal slavery as a terrorist and seems to have zero sympathy for him. God, this bitch is so fucking annoying.

A very interesting story. Very well done.

Great story, really unique too

I confess that I'm struggling a little with your main character.

She has a terrible case of I'm Not Like Other Girls. Yes, she is. She's just outright flunking Asari Culture 101, even though alien cultures are a supposed interest. Human Culture too, really, since the other Asari are acting like something out of Mean Girls.

When they're talking about crest wax? They NOT talking about crest wax. It's about displays of social reciprocation, building common ground and taking each others measure. You know, in the smart way rather than beating chests or dropping trou'.

Also, why does she think anyone on Ilium, even kids, would bare their soul and all the things they really like or are interested in? Goodness know she's not opening up really, either. Getting to know someone takes time. Gaining trust takes time.

Finally, for someone who goes on about trying to keep her secrets and origins, she's doing an outright terrible job. She needs to work to drop the accent, fake interest in that scalp wax and soldier on. By not sucking it up and using the adult fortitude she should presumably have from her previous life, she's doing everything but hiding in obscurity.

Of course, you could be trying to set up a character flaw to add nuance to Terith's personal development. The problem is that it's just too pronounced. It is very hard to like her and since there is very little else we know of her or the plot at this stage, it's also difficult to remain engaged with the story. Being a bit socially awkward, having hidden depths and missing a few cues is fine but outright doing stupid things like provoking Nyxeris is a level of foolish that is difficult to ignore.

This is the best ME story I ever read. I hope you come back and continue it. Your world building and character interactions is amazing.

This story is magnificent! I'm saddened that it hasn't been updated but I appreciate you for having written what you did. I truly wish there were many more like it but it's all the same first contact or regular Isekai themes. I hope you're doing well wherever you are though!

if my memory is correct, omni gel shouldn't exist yet. it was a human invention. if I'm wrong just ignore this comment

i honestly hope this is as far away from canon as possible, i dont ever want to even see the mention of wrex as a person in this story but i wont get that will i?

Quite a fascinating story. A unique concept and plot! Definitely deserves to be continued!

Ugh nerfed angst si is worse than op si

Great chapter!