Reviews for With Grace and Elegance
Slowest Turtle chapter 17 . 7/8
I like this story, but the amount of times you've had enemies almost kill Taylor from behind because she wasn't paying attention is a few too many. It worked once or twice as a plot device, but now it's like, girl, why in the seven hells do you ever turn your back on an enemy? You got shot, stabbed, stuck with a doggy bone-spur-tail-thing, almost shot again, and again. The girl just doesn't learn.
Guest chapter 7 . 1/27
And once again authors allow a little girl into the hands of a pedo.
Zarathustra ubermensch chapter 18 . 12/8/2023
s-s-seigi no mikata
ReviewerPops chapter 10 . 10/21/2023
I mean... Sophia Hess is one stupid bitch for trying to punch someone aggressively while they were carrying a sword and obviously already on a hair trigger. xD
Jaggerbone chapter 23 . 4/17/2023
This how all good stories died. It's irritating reading a good story only to see it dead. This shows lack of planning, structure and pacing to the story. Looking back after reading the whole story, your story is just tension, tension and more tension. It does not have it's slow moment to contemplate what had happened. Especially you forced Danny's attitude to change on a whim cos, let's admit it, you're to lazy to even bother make a character development for him to change.

I recommend you look up Save the Cat. It is a story writing technique similar to the 3 Act Structure. It's a story guide planner that helps you plan out your story, gives it structure and pacing. It will help you plan out your high moments and low moments to create an awesome character arcs. If you ever do a rewrite, I hope you follow a guide and plan out your story. Even if you want to drop the story dead, at least it would have ended with an arc coming to a conclusion.
The guestorino chapter 19 . 3/18/2023
This is prob late, but the from dust to dawn, I’m pretty sure that’s a rwby reference
Malkeus chapter 23 . 1/31/2023
I wish you'd finished the Lung fight, at least...
Malkeus chapter 20 . 1/31/2023
But I don't want to feel sympathy to bakuda...
mst3ktoo chapter 7 . 1/16/2023
You did good on panpan, I hated her. So whiny and wound up, it means me hate Carol more too. Just let the kid turn some rats into unicorns, ya' bitch!
mst3ktoo chapter 4 . 1/16/2023
She broke her hand, they probably won't just let that go...
mst3ktoo chapter 1 . 1/16/2023
Vicious little fuckets
loliwuzhere7120 chapter 6 . 12/12/2022
she is just so useless
god eater chapter 21 . 11/20/2022
sad that this is almost certainly dead but i enjoyed every bit of it. hope you get it back!
god eater chapter 14 . 11/20/2022
should coil release that identity, he not only gain a powerful enemy, brockton bay, the one city he loves would be forfeit with her wrath
god eater chapter 13 . 11/20/2022
the thing with i think coil's power is that it also relies on the most likely part of a situation. his inability to know shinigami powers means that he is essentially blind to regalia's powers and movement
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