Reviews for Reality Intrudes
Duchess67 chapter 6 . 3/15/2022
Oh dear, WHAT is Morrigan doing to Taylor NOW? And did Taylor still trigger? I'm so curious!
Duchess67 chapter 5 . 3/15/2022
Oh my gosh, I HATE the character Sophia Hess!
I wish Morrigan had stayed to talk to the cops on Taylor's behalf, even knowing why she didn't, but maybe after she gets more info she will? Not holding my breath, but hoping she'll at least leave Taylor in a better position than she found her!
corvair jay chapter 10 . 3/11/2022
Fun - More, please!
vera841 chapter 10 . 2/22/2022
Really cool premise of the story.
Difdi chapter 9 . 2/14/2022
Morrigan-as-Taylor killed the hell out of Victor, Alabaster and that stash house… while wearing a FEDORA. Earth Bet’s general public might nit be aware of her, but but those in the know are familiar with the concept of an unstoppable, unbeatable female combat Thinker who wears fedoras…
Difdi chapter 4 . 2/14/2022
Assault & Battery ARE crimes (except when they’re superheroes), but at the time of Taylor’s assault & battery of Emma and Sophia, Taylor was, effectively, a parahuman vigilante taking down and plundering a parahuman criminal gang. After all, So[hia has powers that she uses to commit crimes, which makes her a supervillain.

It’s quite the scam when you think about it - most supers maintain a civilian ID and either a hero or villain one - Sophia’s got a hero ID and a villain ID, with effectively no civilian ID.
LittleSquib0 chapter 10 . 2/11/2022
I can't give a review that you probably haven't already gotten before. You make me hate the characters you want me to. You make me root for the characters that, you guessed it, you want me to. You stick to canon. You give the characters personalities and wordlists that match their character. Things fit seamlessly together. You plan things out well. You make things clear through italicization and bolding. Dopamine rushes throughout the reading, laughs and anger and the entirety of the colorful range of the rainbow.

Basically the staples of a good writer, so there ya go
Jack Inqu chapter 10 . 2/10/2022
Well, I'm glad they aren't just leaving Taylor high and dry to deal with the fallout. This definitely promises to be very interesting indeed.

Take care, good luck, stay safe, stay healthy, and I look forward to your next update.
Jack Inqu chapter 9 . 2/10/2022
Always good to see E88 and Sophia reap what they've sown.
Mad Hamish chapter 10 . 2/6/2022
This just gets better and better. Thank you for it.

Just to be asking, do they know where Taylor’s actual body is, and would they consider pulling her out to train her as a native guide?
H Max Marius chapter 10 . 2/5/2022
Why do I somehow see Taylor eventually giving Neo a run for his money? :)
H Max Marius chapter 9 . 2/5/2022
Ah, so this is the universe where Schwarzenager is 'The Last Action Hero' :)

Ya know... it's really really stupid people so focused on winning that they don't notice the huge-honking crossbow bolt they've shot through their own foot! :P
Guest chapter 10 . 2/1/2022
Very Interesting.
One of your best ever fics.
Really looking forward to the next update.
Thanks for writing
Regards
S
Guest chapter 10 . 2/1/2022
cool
Guest chapter 10 . 2/1/2022
"Sophia, who I was told was Shadow Stalker, is a cape?"

I suppose it might be the 'unreality' of her dreaming of what happened while Morrigan was in control, but it's still kind of funny how she forgot that rather important detail, that was in the letter. Along with some other bits.
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