good story

not liking how Harry tells them everything about everything. writing is ok, but harry just comes across as a tell all.

You made him a f**king ferret animagus. F**k you.

i thought be was knight of the thistle

Harry potter and Star trek, done before, but not DS9, interesting. Let's see how you go! Good start

Oh my goodness! This was really engaging story. I found it recommended from another Potter story. It has been awhile since I watched DS9 orTGN. But your story timeline and plots are interesting and readable.

As far as Harry's own ship, you better make it the Falcon. Cause it would be the best in my opinion. And would piss off the Trekies something fierce. Putting Star Wars in the Trek Universe. But I am totally Bi on the Trek\Wars Universe's. I grew up with both and loved them equally..

Hurry up it, what's happening next! Need to know...

Keep writing. Sincerely JaBeviH2O

Very good. Definitely not the Traveler.

It has been interesting so far, and Harry's luck is starting to turn the downward direction.

Great story but the British Prince being able to order Starfleet Security around, or having any authority at all, is utter nonsense.

The British Monarchy being able to give diplomatic immunity that supersedes Starfleet concerns is also utter hogwash, even if reseeding a post WWIII Earth was on the table.

You have a continuity error in this chapter - in all other chapters, you describe Harry, often in his own words, as a Knight of the Order of the Thistle… but in this chapter, you had him introduce himself as a Knight of the Order of the Garter.

You have a recurring typo in this and previous chapters - every time you meant to write mokeskin, you wrote moleskin instead. Moleskin is a type of cotton fabric, typically used in trousers. Mokeskin is the skin of a magical animal called a moke, which is used for magically-expanded bags.

While Parker Brothers produced Monopoly as a family board game, the original designers intended it to warn people of the evils and dangers of capitalism. An interactive cautionary tale.

You have a physics error in this chapter. Containing a thermonuclear scale explosion, like a photon torpedo produces, within a shield bubble (or other container that can even momentarily withstand the pressure) doesn’t do what you described in the chapter, it does the opposite - makes the explosion MUCH more intense, and therefore MUCH more damaging to the planet.

Is it Vantika or Ventika? Was he smuggling durineum or deuranium? You changed spellings for both a couple times in this chapter.

You have a recurring typo in this chapter and others - most of the times you meant to write synthehol, you actually wrote snythehol.