Reviews for Adversity Breeds Excellence
Darkfire99 chapter 28 . 2/14/2020
I am glad that I found this story again when I first read it it was only about 3 chapters long so while it seemed interesting at the time I left it without following and favoriting it now that I have found it again I am really looking forward to seeing more. Good job.
JManM chapter 19 . 1/27/2020
One important aspect of writing combat is that something plot driving needs to come from it or its just fluff. Catching the rat is big money and solidifies the fight as excellent.
fraewyn chapter 28 . 12/28/2019
Love it!
jaqmaq77 chapter 28 . 12/22/2019
Quite an enjoyable read. Hoping you continue it.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/16/2019
Really hope you update this story
tammgrogan chapter 28 . 12/11/2019
Hello, I just found your Amazing story yesterday. I can't began to tell you how much I am enjoying reading it. Thank you for sharing it with us, Take care and I will be looking forward to your next update. Hopefully it will be soon.
Guest chapter 28 . 12/9/2019
Excellent! The smut is enticing and tasteful. The action is crisp. I think the dual wands are a bit cheesy, but it's all good. I would recommend giving a bit if shine to Ron and Hermione. Perhaps a practice session that displays their cunning and potential. A two on one vs Fleur maybe?
JohnyXD chapter 28 . 12/9/2019
Thank you.
Please keep up the good work.
JohnyXD chapter 18 . 12/9/2019
Based on the story's title and the contents of this chapter, Harry has :
A wand that thrives with adversity.
A wand of excellence.
And a wand for breeding!
...
That was lame, I know, but I had to say it...
spirouFr chapter 28 . 12/8/2019
thanks for your works
George1892 chapter 28 . 11/12/2019
Considering I make an effort to try to stay up to date with all the good new Honks and Flarry (?) stuff I'm not sure how I missed that this was active again.

I've just done a full re-read and it's really good if a little slow. 28 chapters made up mostly of Diagon Alley and studying is a bit much for me.

I think you're committed to the Wonderboy/Aphrodite pet name thing now although that bugs me a bit too. I don't think nicknames that are both cringey and much longer than the person's normal name would ever really catch on. Occasionally, sure. That would be fine. But Nym almost never says "Harry" or "Fleur" which just seems forced at this point. Maybe it's more noticeable because I binged it all at once.

Anyway, it's still a good fic that I'll be following so thank you for coming back to it.
George1892 chapter 19 . 11/11/2019
Oooohh! Possibly freed Snape from being stuck working for the good guys... Interesting.
W0lfgang chapter 28 . 11/7/2019
Ok, I've just found this story and read up to date, and I'm enjoying it. Keep going.
The one thing I would say is don't worry about how often you update. It's your story, your life - update when you can, don't be rushed.
There are plenty of other stories out there for people to read in the meantime.
Erinnyes01 chapter 28 . 11/7/2019
This is just plain really, really good. We don't really get to see too much of Fleur or Tonks in canon, but I love what you've done with them. They're fun, they make decisions like real people, they aren't perfect, and I'm really rather attached to them.

Similarly, I love what you've done with Harry. Frankly I like this version better than the canonical one. It never made sense to me that an otherwise intelligent human who knows for a fact that one of the most dangerous people to ever live wants him dead wouldn't get damn serious about learning how to fight with lethal intent. So Harry is strong, but not unrealistically so, given his motivation and known power.

Relationship wise, wonderful work here again. They're just insanely cute when they're not sexy, and I love Harry having a wand with a core from each of them. Looking forward to hearing about how Tonks family took the big news, and their upcoming return to Hogwarts. Nice job on having a good reason for them to all be there together, should be a wild time, can wait to read more.
Kvoth The Bloodless chapter 14 . 11/6/2019
It was good at the beginning but I believed you rushed the relationships with Fleur and Tonks, and dragging on on his training. You missed great opportunity with the underground fights, could of used that for him to gain experience. And for some reason I feel you have made Tonks extremely over powered and annoying. Also her knowing Legilimency(sp?) for being part of the Black family makes no sense. You should of explained that Arcturus or Orion was more lenient on her mother and that's why she was taught it, if not, she would have never learned it through your reasoning as her mother was disowned and her father was muggleborn.
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