Reviews for Adversity Breeds Excellence
Nimbus2023 chapter 11 . 9/16/2024
Gotta say that I like how you got rid of the scarcrux, it was very creative and preferable to Harry taking an AK to the face like in canon.
Nimbus2023 chapter 6 . 9/16/2024
Harry's what eighteen now? I remember you said the characters are aged up four years. Personally I don't see the point of arbitrarily changing his age if he is still under the same limitations as he was in canon but whatever. The reason I bring the age thing up now is because he is legally an adult in the muggle world, so why is he acting like a subservient bitch to his uncle? What is the benefit of aging him up if this is just the same as canon Harry only now he's even more pathetic since now he's an adult being treated like a house elf? I'm guessing the only reason you aged him up was to allay your conscience when you start writing fucky-fucky scenes with Fleur. That's cool and all but the change in age should come with added benefits to Harry otherwise this is canon Harry that's way too damn old to be taking shit from his uncle.
AkerinSilver chapter 28 . 8/24/2024
Ilove this story and i hope that you are able to continue it
Sleeper 3173 chapter 28 . 8/20/2024
Shame this got abandoned. Had some tantalizing teases on what the future was gonna hold.
jaqmaq77 chapter 19 . 8/4/2024
OK...so can't go home magically because of record player but can go to Dursley's? or did they just dump it?
Binge Reader chapter 6 . 7/20/2024
This is more suited for a Shoujo and here I am hoping for a Seinen. Next thing you know he would bend over and spread his arse cheeks.
Binge Reader chapter 6 . 7/20/2024
Ah, shit. He remains a pussy.
That2-one3-girl4 chapter 28 . 4/30/2024
100/100
Thanks for the hard work !
Can't wait to read more!
Guest chapter 6 . 3/12/2024
So many things…

Overall, super enjoyable chapter… that said…

1. Why was Harry rude to the goblin? He needs their service. It’s like being mean to your waiter as they’re taking g your order.

2. 10g a night with a rate of 20 pounds to a galleon. That’s 200 pounds a night for a crappy little room, in 1994. You could stay at a decent hotel in muggle London for half that in ‘94.

3. Fleur has a sister named Gabrielle… not Gabriel, which is a man’s name.

Little things that don’t really mess with the plot (except maybe the goblin thing. Which is weird and very evil Pureblood-like behavior.
Bluenait chapter 1 . 9/10/2023
Why the hell should I read this shit if it's the same as in canon?
The only difference is that the characters are just older?
That means we have the same useless pussy potty beta bitch potter so fuck this trash heep
Aetherium21 chapter 28 . 9/5/2023
Hey it’s been 4 years since you did anything here. Guess we’ll consider everything to be abandoned…. Disappointing considering your work is far better than most stories on FF
Aetherium21 chapter 8 . 9/5/2023
Ahahaha what a fun chapter. It’s been at least a couple years since I read thisexcited to continue
Guest chapter 28 . 7/6/2023
Dumbledore never tried fulfilling the prophecy. The only reason he acted on it was because he knew that once Voldemort found out (which he would, because Snape was thrown out in the Hog's Head), Voldemort would never stop hunting Harry.

Dumbledore straight-up tells Harry that he's free to ignore the prophecy, but that Voldemort would never let go.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/11/2023
Srry about that, was very angry at another author and my head was too up there to realise that I was reviewing another author in another tab. Again my sincere apologies.
Btw loved your work, it's amazing.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/11/2023
Oh, what a surprise! Another round of excuses from our esteemed author. Falling sick and losing consciousness, how unfortunate! We eagerly await the next episode of your unreliable updates. Your readers must be on the edge of their seats, wondering what imaginative ailment awaits next. Keep up the fantastic performance!
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