Reviews for The Awakening of Monika
SquallLeonhart93 chapter 7 . 12/16/2017
I practically lol'd out at the Monika After Story part.
Looking good so far, I believe that the intriguing file has something to do with her. What else would delete all of your personal files to keep its storage hunger sated?
Captain Health chapter 7 . 12/16/2017
Its looking goooood
Axel chapter 6 . 12/14/2017
Awww, I love the interaction between them. You are doing a wonderful job of showing the consciousness of the main character. I Look forward to more :)
Speedyquader chapter 6 . 12/13/2017
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA THAT WAS HILARIOUS! XD It makes sense, too XD
Anibi chapter 6 . 12/12/2017
This is quite a good read, honest. The summary really makes you think twice about coming in, but when you do, it's weird how fun and awing this actually is. I now find myself wishing that I was the MC... Monika, notice me too :'/

Anyway, I'll be waiting for future updates!

Kanagamita's out~
Shy-Guyome chapter 6 . 12/12/2017
So... if it wasn't the porn... what did she first saw? :
TheTrueOverlordBear chapter 6 . 12/12/2017
Just finished playing DDLC today. Monika got me going tsundere, and so does this piece of fanfiction as well.
Ubersupersloth chapter 6 . 12/12/2017
Wait, so then what files did Monika see/delete?
CheesusChrist15 chapter 5 . 12/10/2017
Damn, my inner fanboy has awakened
Xerion chapter 5 . 12/7/2017
I saw this, and I was a bit weirded out about what it could possibly be. But I decided to read it- and, wow. I'm really enjoying it. It's pretty cute, but it's not overkill, and I'm not cringing; I'm actually awing instead.. that make sense? I hope it does, but uh, good stuff, heh.

-Xerion
Axel chapter 5 . 12/5/2017
Hey! Just finished reading what you have so far, and I'm loving it! Finished DDLC myself and I'm just fascinated by Monika and her sentience.

You have a nice flow to your writing, you're not getting bogged down too much in detail and you're also not skimming on it. I get enough information to establish what is going on and how the characters feel.

I very much look forward to seeing where this goes. :D
Reviewer chapter 5 . 12/5/2017
Bruh, you HAVE to continue this. This is legit amazing, i love it so much. Please please please publish more
Guest chapter 5 . 12/4/2017
I am loving this, the conflict doesn't even need some asshole, just progress of Monika becoming closer with tech!
If you can somehow bs her to real life I will kick myself
...and jerk to the 18 scene I know you want
Linkdeous chapter 5 . 12/3/2017
Really love it !
Next chapter :D !
Speedyquader chapter 5 . 12/3/2017
D'awww! X3 Keep this going, it's so cute! I have to wonder how she got herself onto his phone though... She just moved herself instead of the game, but that wouldn't do much to the amount of storage space she'd take up... Hmm... Maybe she compressed herself? Though that wouldn't do much... Or is this just plot, screw the storage space? XD
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