|Reviews for Transformers Book I, Rise of Unicron: Part I, The Young Prime (Old)|
| AllsparkCarrier04 chapter 6 . 5/29/2020
Just keep it as is. I have never read anything like this. Please continue writing.
| AllsparkCarrier04 chapter 7 . 5/29/2020
Yes, continue! Please! I was really sad to see that not more of the story was finished. I really wanted Optimus Prime to find the protoform, Aurora his daughter. Please write more!
| Guest chapter 7 . 4/11/2020
1) I want this story continued as is because this story seems perfect like a transformers 6 story, like a sequel of the last knight.
2) with the last knight design i mean megatron and barricade to appear like they appear in transformers the last knight, their aspects from the last knight is the most i prefer in all the movies.
I really hope to read as soon as possible the next chapter.
Ps: can you insert like villain with unicron also galvatron (perhaps like a resurrected ultimate version of the fallen or like new character created by unicron) like he appears in transformers 4. I would like to see megatron from the last knight destroy galvatron.
Pps: to witch character reassemble aurora? arcee from transformers prime or shatter from bumblebee?
| EclipseFirelight chapter 7 . 4/11/2020
I think that was me before I logged in. I could be wrong. When I said to use the Last Knight as a template, I meant use your first draft but throw in a little more from the Last Knight movie. Megatron and Barricade are good ones to use, and Quintessa is definitely a little like Thanos. Don't do too much Avenger style, but a little to help simplify the background could work. Basically, use the Bay films, but you don't have to use all the details. Use some for a bit of a background if you need it, but continue with your current plot. Your first draft is good and just needs to be added to a little. Thanks for the questions and keep it up.
| Guest chapter 6 . 4/5/2020
Please continue this story. I really love it. Make aurora fell in love with megatron or barricade (the last knight designs)
| Guest chapter 5 . 2/3/2019
I personally prefer that is with megatron that aurora will fell in love, so will be finally peace between autobots and decepticons.
| Guest chapter 5 . 2/3/2019
I want to know: aurora will fell in love with someone? Please tell me yes. And please make her fell in love or with megatron or barricade. Update soon please and answer me
| Fanficteller chapter 5 . 2/3/2019
Aurora needs the alternate mode to see the outside world. Good story so far.
| Wacko12 chapter 5 . 2/2/2019
you mean Hound and Sparkling
| Pajama Man chapter 5 . 1/19/2019
Wacko, Aurora is the young Prime.
| Pajama Man chapter 5 . 12/23/2018
I just want to know, is Elita One the mother of Aurora? Also, is Elita One or whomever else the mother is still alive?
| Guest chapter 5 . 10/22/2018
This is great!
| Wacko12 chapter 3 . 1/8/2018
so where's the young prime?