|Reviews for The Jashinist and the Yamanaka Family|
| Anaelyssa chapter 1 . 7/9
| kayra isis chapter 1 . 6/4
hello! just came here from reading the konoha demon advisor
i loved these stories, really!
you actually managed to create a master piece, respecting the characters personality and getting into the story so naturally thats almost cannon!
hope to read one of your stories soon!
(sorry any mistakes, english is not my first language)
| Hello chapter 1 . 4/2
:( this was so sweet i love
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/17
This is a multi chapter right? Love the first chapter and the premise of the story. Hoping you will update soon! Please let this be a multi chapter story
| MinakoTrickster chapter 1 . 1/28
I remember reading this and favoriting for two reasons. To properly review it and out of love for this idea.
This story is certainly about hope, second chances and the fact that too often these ninja experience some fucked up shit while young. Hidan, in this piece, is certainly a child of circumstances. Ibiki is a man of his own traumas. To see Inoichi, a man we only ever get glimpses of, in this element. Ino works on forcing her friends and rivals to flourish, so it seems she got this trait from both her parents.
The fic was beautifully written and you effortlessly, It seems, brought these characters together. Ino is a girl if attitude and care, she used that in winning over some of the scariest men of this universe for sure.
I always adore an 'uncle Ibiki' and now I will add a big brother Hidan to that mix. Because it was too cute, especially given what they would teach Ino. None of her future boyfriends stand a chance. XD
Nicely written and thank you.
| Jeye chapter 1 . 1/24
this story gave me good vibes in the end...you know how to write a damn satisfying conclusion!
| G3r1k chapter 1 . 1/9
Can there be more of this? Like later down the line of Naruto, maybe have them clear Hidans name
| Merikat chapter 1 . 12/22/2017
Aw I loved this story! It brought me through so many ups and downs. The character development Ibiki and Hidan had seemed genuine, and the part when Ino was getting dropped off at the academy and she said she'd tell the teachers Jashin would dance over the corpse of their dog was hilarious! XD
I'm gonna look at your page to see what else you've written. Thank you!
| BluenetteBookworm chapter 1 . 11/24/2017
This was a wonderful read! I love the concept of the whole story, and I really hope you do continue this a series! I've always been a fan of this ship and I don't know why more people aren't! Anyway, thank you for the amazing content! xox
| MadHat chapter 1 . 11/22/2017
Adorable story and well written too. This world needs more stories about second chances, I think.
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/20/2017
I loved this!
| Eihren chapter 1 . 11/20/2017
I love this one shot, but I need more! I would love to see how Hidan's stay in Konoha afect the chunin exams, also how Ino does in it knowing Ibiki before hand
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/19/2017
This story is so cute. I love the interactions between Hidan and the rest of the family! So much fluff and love! Thanks for the chapter
| Yami no Akuma Okami chapter 1 . 11/19/2017
OOOHHH MYYY GOOOD! I FUCKING LOVE IT! SUCH A BEAUTIFUL STORY, I'M TOUCHED! The interactions between Hidan and young Ino is so fucking cute, I swear I nearly died. Hope you make more stories between the Yamanakas, Hidan and Ibiki.