shit man hopefully he never able to rape lyanna

Amazing story i so want a update

This story is so fucking amazing! Here’s to hope it gets finished!

Griphook? Harry Potter?

I like the omake I always wanted someone to address what the targaryens done to the Starks

Why the fuck does this have a Greek Goddess in it if they are from the north... Greece has no place to be in a area called "The North" that's like calling New Hampshire the Midwest

Is this whole story nonsensical? Sure. So are most fairytales, and this is far more enjoyable than many of those. So give it a go, and I hope that the author eventually comes back to the story.

What, Brandon the builder son of the goddess Artemis, are you kidding me? If you are aiming at turning the North more northern you should have gone for Skadi from Norse mythology instead.

Such a shame this ended on such a cliffhanger.

There are too much discrepancy in this story you basically follow the canon. Stark are not house of noble. They are Empire like ghiscari or valyrian. Kings or royalty not noble. You are forcing them to bow to the ruling targaryen. If the stark is weak like canon they can do that. No no no. This is shite. Noble or royal family dies for lesser insult. Why they follow the southern kingdom after 8000 tradition of isolation is because you want to force them to follow canon. Damn this is infuriating. Hey man can I give you free hostage? Here take my child brandon so you can give me I dont know maybe better access to winterfell, wealth, or my wife even better my kingdom. Fuck you author go shite yourself and your shitty story

I dont understand why stark managed to lose. They have giant, children of forest, and warg. Their armor and weapon are much superior than targaryen. There are much plothole in your story. They have army of green man that you said in your story managed to sow chaos. What targaryen have are dragons can be negated by eagle or giant crossbow, giant can destroy any cavalry or army, warg even more dangerous. You have ironborn to sow chaos. Damn you nerfed stark too much.

I sincerely hope that you come back to this story. It is amazing. I love what you have done to the north. Epic fic.

Please update

We need more

I know that several reviewers have criticized your formatting and overview of the Stark line since its founding; however, after reading your story in its entirety, I actually am grateful for that overview because it gives me all the background knowledge I need to understand the rest of the story. So thank you very much and I look forward to where the story goes from here. Winter is Coming