Reviews for Another Path
Guest chapter 6 . 10/2
yuuzhan vong biots
Guest chapter 6 . 9/20
AWESOME!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/20
Sunstone/Fortress of Solitude(Kole)/Wonderdome/New Themyscira/Thalarion/Mythlands-Cosmopolitan, Multiethnic/Omniethnic/Citizenry of the Empire of the Silver Snake/Zerox/Skartaris/Nth Metal/Mother Box-Element X-Celestial City/Warworld
Guest chapter 1 . 9/20
Krakoa/Superego/Phalanx

Techno Organic Jungle virus Intergalactic Empire of Wakanda

Telefloronics

Asteroid M(s)-Krakoa- Savageland(s), Danger, Planet X Attilan(Zero-Techno-organic-Technoarchy, Phalanx, Barbuda, Builders

Sunstone/Fortress of Solitude(Kole)/Wonderdome/New Themyscira/Thalarion/Mythlands-Cosmopolitan, Multiethnic/Omniethnic/Citizenry of the Empire of the Silver Snake/Zerox/Skartaris/Nth Metal/Mother Box-Element X-Celestial City/Warworld

Flying teleporting superscience city on own planet in own solar system in own pocket dimension each in own five hundred trillion alternative universes

Prim8-werecyborggorilla (duplicate eight for balance) with superintelligent tinker/thinker build nanoforge/fabricator post scarcity barrel of monkeys army armed with monkeywrench for super science magic wand

Kong/Grodd/Ultra-Humanite/Jokaero/Captain Simian and the Space Monkeys/Super Apes/Super Abominapes/Ghouloon

Kwisatz Haderach powers summon and command the cinnamon spice like dust and sandstorm Cinnamon beach desert sandstorm

summon copy of opponent under thrall

Shmoo
Eierlegende Wollmilchsau or egg laying wool-milk-sow

Clever assassination or attrition

Conflict is apparently more interesting to read about for most people than post bio/cyber solar punk post scarcity still I want to read about it

Everyone should have Symbioid duplicate a dozen like angelus warriors

Some think if it goes on like this it's not going to be any different than if aliens conquered/enslaved humanity we'd be bred to alter brain chemistry to be like dogs who genetically worship our masters as work/herd/guard/attack/lap/etc dogs

Survive-flight/eat/fight/mate THIS is who we are at our core we can't control our nature but we can control our actions

Corrupt and incompetent authorities who screwed it all up

The shards screw with peoples heads and seek out conflict

On top of trauma the shards give you want you think you want in the worst possible way

Choose the worst of us at our lowest

So there is no using tinker tech to improve society medically or arcology building and farming and the environment because they are there to make things worse

Maybe all powers like that

G.E.C.K
matter replicator-Vending Machine

Synthdroid

Human replica droid

blasters, droid army, ships

medpack- diagnostics such as medisensors and also could provide flexclamps, synthflesh, irrigation bulbs, bacta, kolto, spray-bandages, bacta patches, spray hypos, bone stabilizers, antiseptics, medical drugs, coagulants, stimulants such as stim-shots, and other essential medicines for the treatment of wounds.

Terraform processor
Farkiller

Infantization is also abuse

the real world is a harsh and violent place that sometimes takes a fair amount of violence to survive in

Floating teleporting archipelago palace eyerie pyramid with a dozen smaller of same in garage

Spore-virus/bacteria
Swarms wasp/kaiju dragonmen snake/scorpion tails
Packs of Heavenhounds batwinged three headed wolfmen/werecerberusmen
Flocks (fauna)chimera-wyvern/wolf/sabretooth(stripes/spots)/bat/avianmen
Guest chapter 1 . 7/21
So, a Mary Sue of Taylor, and no plot apart from raping the canon? I'll pass, thank you.
Swordhunter89 chapter 6 . 6/17
Great read looking forward to more.
Ryan chapter 6 . 2/13
This story was Amazeballs! That pace is great too.
tronax22 chapter 1 . 11/8/2019
Hard to understand what you are trying to say sometimes. English not your first language? Regardless, you might want to edit this text.

Another decent idea would change thinking/speaking style of different characters, so that they wouldn't, you know, all be same style.
Barreck chapter 1 . 9/9/2019
There is a difference between not being a whimp and just a bit lost and being a psychopath.
cnaadirah chapter 1 . 7/23/2019
I want to know why everyone is making Taylor gay? It is starting to take away from stories that are showing such excellent potential. And it’s really getting annoying. I have to skip parts because of this. Why the romance so early in the story. It’s not natural for it to happen so fast. It doesn’t make since they hardly know each other at all. If you ever do another story, flesh out the characters, get the audience to fall in love with them too. The potential is there. No need to rush to get chapters out if you’re giving details and making it more realistic. You had pulled me in pretty early in the chapter. I just hope it gets better. The unrealistic romance is turning me off. If I could write it, I would. I’m just trying to let you know that you are writing very well,but the romance needs to go at this point. Let them get to know each other and work on the plot. I hope the plot isn’t their romance.
Glorandar chapter 6 . 6/19/2019
Another very enjoyable story. Thanks for sharing!
Sebine chapter 1 . 6/9/2019
y'all got some weird typos and missing words
The Shadows Mistress chapter 6 . 4/28/2019
liked this one, actually not sure if your going to continue but it ends every well here. another fun story
bearblue chapter 6 . 1/5/2019
I found this very enjoyable! Thank you for sharing this! :)
ShugoYuuki123 chapter 6 . 11/21/2018
Will you be continuing with this story?
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