Reviews for OP, Yes Please!
Rake1810 chapter 9 . 14h
Get better! Any car crash you walk away from is something to be celebrated. I’m glad to hear yiure healing. Looking foreward to the next chapter.
Williams1996 chapter 2 . 8/13
So mini Primarch then
hideki667 chapter 1 . 8/11
Just want to point out, you know CYOA Alexandra is stronger than canons version to the point that it could kill the strongest superman in seconds. Its description is that you cant be hurt period, not even by magic or drowning, and you have limitless strength. Same with CYOA kaleidoscope, it is essentially a limit broken power manipulation with an OP version of canon kaleidoscope.

Besides that I think the chapter was fine, just pointing these out.
DareusX chapter 9 . 8/11
Your story, your rules
GreenRena chapter 9 . 8/11
Well, shit. Talk about bad luck.
Hope things will look up for you from here on.
And if some idiot tells you to change the srory we like so much, always remember: your story, your rules!
Hope birdy gets better soon, bye.
djon863 chapter 9 . 8/10
hope that you get better soon
DragonsGifte chapter 9 . 8/10
rest and heal we can wait
Scoolio chapter 9 . 8/10
Shit. You sure your up for writing again? Take some time mate. Get yourself some space if you don’t feel your up to it. Get better!
hye1995 chapter 9 . 8/10
Holy shit. I am glad you are okay! Man, that is just irresponsible of them, to go one-hundred-and-fucking-five miles per hour. And then having a pallet fuck up you hand? You are pretty damn unlucky. Or maybe lucky, depending on how you look at it. It could have gone a lot worse.

Also, you should name names. I am fairly certain death threats violates some guidelines. And if not, they should.
FanBladeX100 chapter 9 . 8/9
Hope you get better. You could just block whoever’s sending the PM’s. I’m not completely sure how, but I think it’s possible.
MurphysLaw89 chapter 9 . 8/9
Damn, that sucks royally. Sorry to hear that, man. Hope things somehow work out for you.
MadCapThrothren chapter 9 . 8/9
Hey man, I hope your getting better, better that you heal then me complaining about the next chapter. Other than that, love the story and hope you get well soon and get Birdy back in working order
cyboot chapter 1 . 8/6
MC doesn't want to be there, thinks this is a horrible nightmare...
can take kaleidoscope, takes kaleidoscope...
fanfic doesn't end right after power selection due to the MC going home...

you didn't even manage to keep your MC's actions consistent with his character during the intro
LuluViBritania chapter 2 . 8/5
if he doesn't use Shaper to create Human type Cylon Backups where if his body dies he has hundreds of backups incase his body dies this fic will turn silly because while its op in most Verses its still pathetic against the hard hitters of the hardverses and his Worthy opponent will be at those levels due to his Kaleidoscope Choice
LuluViBritania chapter 1 . 8/5
i have no idea why you would select any companions let alone all of them when you select Power Manipulator because you could evetually create a power related around making oaths unbreakable thus loyalty oaths while wouldn't force them to be loyal aka mind fuck but make it impossible to betray you(as in backstab they are free to leave but cannot reveal your secrets)

and why Worthy opponent why! it clearly states "YOU CANNOT AVOID THESE CONFRONTATIONS" so unless you manage to kill it it will follow you even through the Multiverse if you picked the most OP option available Kaleidoscope
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